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Dont Send Me On A Stray

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Dont Send Me On A Stray

Moved by your tears
Even though you did not have to show your fears
I keep having this thought
Your honesty to me,you have brought
What if you did not stay?
Please don`t send me on a stray

Struggle through lifes`sometimes unbareable task
Its written in letters of gold
Keeper of the faith,you do not need to ask
Those who act evil,shall exit in evil ways
Legacy of the word,spoken from wise mind
You were brought into this world like a peaceful weapons system
With you I will never walk blind

What if it was all for nothing?

23rd.January 2012

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  1. Date: 1/31/2012 9:52:00 AM
    I see a lot of deep thinking here in this wonderful poem. Questioning one's self?? Glad I stopped by...enjoyed !!

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 4:53:00 AM
    This poem was well written and from the heart. I hope it well read. Thanks for sharing your heart with us, Jancarl

  1. Date: 1/29/2012 7:33:00 AM
    Alone tomorrow, but still alive. It's how so many of us must survive. Just what did cause the isolation. That my friend, is the eternal question.

  1. Date: 1/28/2012 7:23:00 AM
    You write from a special heart and that is rare my friend... I will be stopping by more often to check out your work..... Michael

  1. Date: 1/26/2012 11:58:00 PM
    Arlid, don't worry.. Love it when a man shows true emotions.. If i send my silly man away..he will stray away..i know it.. he never put on good feelings... great poem... Enjoyed stopping by tonight, have yourself a wonderful Friday! ;-) always,..pd

  1. Date: 1/26/2012 5:50:00 PM
    Just coming here to say HI. Hope to see a new poem from you soon.

  1. Date: 1/26/2012 3:23:00 PM
    oooh I like this one.. very well written and the rhyme is nice, too.. take care..

  1. Date: 1/26/2012 9:11:00 AM
    Enjoyed your write and I think we all have doubts at one point or another. Then it is only for a moment and then the doubt is gone. We all question based on what is happening around us. Keep the faith. love phyl

  1. Date: 1/26/2012 2:12:00 AM
    A wonderful write here Arild really enjoyed reading it..........spandan.

  1. Date: 1/25/2012 10:08:00 PM
    A very thoughtful in depth write Arild I really enjoyed the read, Brenda : )

  1. Date: 1/25/2012 8:12:00 PM
    That's what it is; you give it all or you get nothing.

  1. Date: 1/25/2012 1:52:00 PM
    Love it Arild, thank you for your comment on my rant about recession, best wishes Elizabeth

  1. Date: 1/25/2012 8:59:00 AM
    I feel your tender heart in this wonderful verse. The message depicts loss and hope in such a fulfilling way Arild. Love, Lizzie

  1. Date: 1/25/2012 1:34:00 AM
    I think we all been through those moments of doubt Arild, I absolutely love how your brought the feelings about in this write.. I can also identify with them :) Wilma

  1. Date: 1/24/2012 1:22:00 PM
    a wonderful way to express faith in yourself, arild.. what a beautiful piece and reminder..:) hugggs!

  1. Date: 1/24/2012 1:18:00 AM
    a peaceful weapons system... a very interesting term you got here Arild. I believe everything happens for a reason, all is about choices only. thank you for your visit and kind comments. is this for contest? good luck if it is, you have something good here

  1. Date: 1/23/2012 11:59:00 PM
    This one makes me curious to know who inspired you to write it? Who is it about? I sure hope it was not all for nothing. You are too kind a soul!!!

    Date: 1/25/2012 8:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    The question is not who but what?
  1. Date: 1/23/2012 10:20:00 PM
    Don't doubt.

    Ertsland Avatar Arild Andresen Ertsland
    Date: 1/24/2012 3:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I try not to
  1. Date: 1/23/2012 1:59:00 PM
    You really had me convinced of you sincere devotion...then you threw the question in at the end making me feel like you are completely human again! Doubt surrounds me at times too...thank goodness I have learned NOT to live based on how I feel all the time..I would be in a hurt of trouble..Like the keeper of the faith ..u do not need to ask...Gwendolen

    Rix Avatar Gwendolen Rix
    Date: 1/23/2012 2:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry