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Below is the poem entitled DIAMONDS IN THE EYES which was written by poet Yesha Shah. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Lasting gaze lingers, longing pair of eyes that shine Pouring love with each flicker, desires burn bright... A subtle tenderness of your glance, locked with mine Oh! One could eternally go on beholding this sight. Your affection- intensified, projects in that gleamy sheen As I lower my eyelids, racing heart just skipping a beat Arrhythmic breathing, hiding that blush all along I've been From those glistening eyes that stare with a piercing heat! Fiery look as embers of a fresh new romance spark Air rife with tension as electricity of attractions crackle Beginning of a love story with the cupid's arrow mark Music of violins floats around as lovelorn eyes twinkle! More soulful words than what a thousand love letters to you, could say Emotions of heart, through eyes, the flowing stream of diamonds convey! 2/10/2012

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  1. Date: 10/19/2012 1:48:00 PM
    You captured love so beautifully in this write! Congrats on your win! Hugs

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 7:23:00 AM
    Thanking you today for your comments on my writing Yesha. I hope you have a very pleasant weekend and I wish to see more of your work next week. Love, Carol XXXX

  1. Date: 10/13/2012 9:36:00 AM
    Congrats on this great poem winning in the contest!

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 7:10:00 PM
    Wonderful poem Yesha - well done - Shaz

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 10:43:00 PM

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 8:35:00 PM
    YESHA, congratulations, with your awesome poem in Gail's contest..... xox~pd

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 3:16:00 PM
    congrats on your win Yesha...

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 2:40:00 PM
    Yesha this is far and above the best I have read wonderful use of alliteration, original presentations of common images, great use of vocabulary, enjambment [a number one write] Congrad's on your win Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 11:42:00 AM
    i like you poem friend Yesha..Congratulations on your win on Gail's contest. cheers!!!

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 10:44:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Gail's "Diamond" contest Yesha. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 9:14:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win, Yesha. Love, Suzette

  1. Date: 10/4/2012 2:19:00 PM
    Yesha, I am afraid to see your clerihews before I judge my contest. So that's why I am ignoring them for now. Tell me which one you are not posting in my contest and I'll go read it!! HOpe you are having a great day!! How do you like the new changes here?

  1. Date: 10/3/2012 11:25:00 PM
    very very romantic write..enjoy your share Yesha..and thank you for letting all the soup lovers have this amazing feeling!!!<3<3<3 ..luv SK

  1. Date: 10/3/2012 10:00:00 AM
    feeling warm and fuzzy,yesh... with words of wonder, you took the theme and made it your very own.. best wishes and huggs!..:)

  1. Date: 10/3/2012 7:09:00 AM
    Hey, Yesha, you and I were sure on the same wave length the way we approached this theme. I did not take the exact same way of stating it, but I too did mine on strangers falling in love!! NICELY done, my friend. soupmail.

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 10:13:00 PM
    I like this poem. It paints the picture of the scene and mood very well - JH

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 12:12:00 PM
    Yesha, very romantic indeed, I like the flow and the way I can see you lowering your eyes, I like it...David.. hope you are well..

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 1:51:00 AM
    well-done!! very creative Yesha..good luck in the contest..good day!!! (^_^)

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 1:36:00 AM
    Really lovely poem Yesha!! You always write beautiful poems, thank you for sharing this with me. Have a lovely day. oxox / / love Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 1:20:00 AM
    Beautifull penned Yesha.Best wishes to you.