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Destiny's Raven

Through a day sky’s clarity, if one plucked out from the bluest of blue… 
Destiny’s raven, would have no need for sighted path or striking clue 
Only to have found ironic in our heart the compassion to listen this day…
This point of view, if not a destiny’s telling and better say:

For this raven’s destiny defined as a life itself tied to a sad place in time
A world where matters not that children cry while others missed - never to find

Save not, our choice to ply, the wondering of rhyme, reason or the asking of why?

Yet, says our destiny’s raven to me and you,

 “…a requiting in kind, long overdue? Yet, to be witnessed by many, and seen only by the few!”

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  1. Date: 11/27/2013 1:52:00 AM
    Dave,, Thank you for spreading and sharing your kindness. I am very grateful and thankful to all who have been supportive of me one way or another. Your heartfelt words are the main attraction of who you are… Thanks for your inspiring visit. ----- Happy Thanksgiving ~ LINDA