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Desire --- For Catie's Re-Write Contest

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Desire --- For Catie's Re-Write Contest

DESIRE (Catie's Poem)

I thirst for one drop
precious the nectar of hearts
fill my cup to overflow.
Flames dance in the light
like my soul reaching for love
a constant, steady rhythm.

THE FIRE (My Re-write) ~ I dare not to stop, dangerous nectar of hearts, which fills me with temptation. A torch in the dark, like a moth reaching for love, willing to die in the flame.
.........For Catie

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  1. Date: 10/29/2012 3:38:00 PM
    oh, and you did one for Catie too. It is fun to see how you did it. Both poems are so good.

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 2:38:00 PM
    Reads like a winner..Good luck in her contest..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Very expresive and descriptive with the use of metaphoric language..Thanks for stopping by...Sara

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 9:06:00 PM
    "I dare not to stop,"..."willing to die in the flame"!! Mrs. Richards!! : ) Terrific! They're twin poems! You two should write a collaboration. Great work, Carrie! Ruben.

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 8:00:00 PM
    Wonderful poetry by both of you!Enjoyed.

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 7:58:00 PM
    oh my...I selected this poem of Catie and was trying to write something....hahaha....See u beat me!