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Below is the poem entitled Desire which was written by poet Dana Smith. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Once my words have reached your ears, And my lips have brushed with tease, You'll no longer feel control at all, For my acceptance be your ease. My ravish and my charm be sweet, And my sensation be your thread; Each word that slips from easy sounds Will forever roam your head... One day, if not tonight, you'll see, And you'll forever squirm so willing. And looking back at things thought 'charming' Now you'd only find them chilling. So you shall wriggle with denial, And soon you'll cry yourself to sleep. But until the day you see me truly, Your forgiving love shall seep. ~Game Over

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  1. Date: 4/6/2012 11:51:00 PM
    Smile ˜ Powerful ˜ "Happy Easter" * Love, John!:) ˜

  1. Date: 4/1/2012 3:44:00 PM
    Fantastic write! You have amazing skill

  1. Date: 4/1/2012 1:46:00 PM
    You have a gift to get down your feelings with such rhythm and the story is wonderful!

  1. Date: 3/22/2012 6:39:00 AM
    Always enjoy your work. You are one of my favorite poetesses.

  1. Date: 3/18/2012 11:36:00 AM
    Keep this up and the male version will come and smoke you.. Careful child...

    Smith Avatar Dana Smith
    Date: 6/26/2012 2:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    The male version has already gotten me
    Date: 4/6/2012 11:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Smile * What Did You Say kong? Yesss, read my mind! )
    Tunk Avatar Billy Tunk
    Date: 3/18/2012 12:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yea it seemed foreign to you and i was thinking, "what hath come over her" But i am familiar with this "from other's perspectives"....
    Smith Avatar Dana Smith
    Date: 3/18/2012 11:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    It is not from my perspective