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Describing Autumn

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Describing Autumn

There are only so many shades of turning leaves, so many berry-stained skies to describe before the hues merge and burn through. Only so many times I can wax poetic on the waxed-wood sheen of horse chestnuts, only so many sun-dappled apple depictions. My lexicon trawls fall's lush colour spectrum hoping to harvest new autumn-rich words.

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  1. Date: 7/17/2012 11:01:00 AM
    Stay away from cliche (as you do here) and autumn will continue to reveal its possibilities. With them, will come the new words you seek. I know you will find them. Your "lexicon" is limitless. Soup mail reply to you.

  1. Date: 11/17/2011 10:23:00 PM
    Stumbled on this today.....great write!

  1. Date: 11/8/2011 8:21:00 AM
    congrads on this winner but it's missing your vocabulary.

  1. Date: 11/8/2011 5:27:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in ^Rick's "8 Line Verse" contest Charlotte. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/8/2011 2:22:00 AM
    Congratulations on you success in the contest. You only thought you had run out of words, didn't you. This is an Autumn-rich poem. Well penned Charlotte...Margaret

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    Date: 11/8/2011 5:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I wanted to approach the theme from a slightly different angle margaret; there are only so many times you can write about a season before it becomes, well, a little stale and cliched...I was pondering "how can I make this fresh when it's all been said before?" then a light pinged on in my brain - "THAT'S your angle!"!!
  1. Date: 11/7/2011 10:19:00 PM

  1. Date: 11/7/2011 9:33:00 PM
    and congrats here too. I will have to go back to the list to see what number you placed. If I were giving you a win, it would be way at the top!

  1. Date: 11/7/2011 7:44:00 PM
    Congrats Charlotte on a spectacular win for this stunningly beautiful poetry luv..

  1. Date: 11/7/2011 2:39:00 PM
    Great verse Charlotte. Congratulations on your win in Autumn's Dream contest

  1. Date: 11/2/2011 9:07:00 PM
    WOWie Zowie!! I hope you WIN.