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Death Of The Muse

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Death Of The Muse

Bare patches of sand like ringworm
Appear in the garden of my thoughts.
Hangs in darkness like black smoke
As I hear this passing away.

As this darkness looms about 
I am blind and think of the roses,
But clutching I feel it free
And I feel it moving with so much dust.

They grab onions for me, unwrapping
And tilt everything in my throat,
Saying the band must be loosened,
I’m no longer feeling to their spices.

But does the spur dies, no
It leaves with the man, immortal.
This departure only has seemed
To be a dazzling dawn.  

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  1. Date: 2/24/2013 12:19:00 PM
    I enjoyed the read. Picturesque!

  1. Date: 11/18/2011 5:14:00 AM
    Congratulations on your placement in Brian's "Any 2011 Poem" contest Nebeolisa. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/18/2011 1:59:00 AM
    This is superb,bro. Can feel the sway of sorrow in every word of your lines. Nice one and congrats

  1. Date: 11/16/2011 2:57:00 AM
    congrats ~LUV*SKAT

  1. Date: 11/15/2011 10:31:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Nebeolisa

  1. Date: 6/30/2011 6:48:00 PM
    Creative, interesting and little bit intriguing expressions, Nebeolisa

  1. Date: 6/24/2011 8:13:00 PM
    i mean never utter another word to me again, you do not understand the thirst of a parent wrongly do not speak to me ever again

  1. Date: 6/24/2011 8:12:00 PM
    notice the bat shit crazy and never speak to me again, posterous goes

  1. Date: 6/24/2011 8:11:00 PM
    the blog is coming i know

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