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Death Left

My lungs feel weighted down drowning in the salted tears,
Is this death finally grabbing a hold of me, it should not be a mystery. 
My throat is thick and clogged, as if his whole fist were reaching within,
Is this death ever going to finish, or is he just toying with me.
My heart is suffocating in its own seeping love,
Is this death finished yet because it still feels like a rotisserie?
My wrists are dripping with heartache and despair,
Is this death running to me because I have no more humanity? 
My body is in this cage of loneliness and sorrow,
Is this death’s final act intended to sacrifice me or leave me in my own misery?
I crave deaths wishes, because I would be given one more moment with him,
Is this death giving up on me, flying away to find his own destiny?
It all ended right then and there I was hollow and buried with only blackness to share.

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  1. Date: 12/23/2010 2:24:00 PM
    Thanks for the comment on my poem! anyway, I really like this poem, I can really feel the pain you must have felt while writing this. Very creative!

  1. Date: 12/1/2010 3:47:00 AM
    Can feel the deep hurt

  1. Date: 11/29/2010 9:06:00 AM
    May your week bring you good health,may your heart overflow with love, and may your life bring you amazing inspiration to continue your writing. I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning and thank you for sharing it Aimee. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/29/2010 2:12:00 AM
    When we lose someone we love, something inside us seems to die, Aimee. I think this would classify as a "rhyme." And a very good one too! Welcome to Poetry Soup. I look forward to reading more of your work. Best wishes, Carolyn

  1. Date: 11/28/2010 6:02:00 AM
    Deep poetry Aimee, it sure leaves the reader imaging your thoughts >> James

  1. Date: 11/28/2010 5:56:00 AM
    Strong write on lost love and death...I can fell yur pain in this well write write...