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Dear God

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Dear God

Dear God this is hard times 
we are livin' in, with my 
Peers doin' time and dyin', 
the only lesson you ever 
taught me is never to give 
up and, 
Always follow your lead. 
But I’m here confused and 
stranded in this land, 
Why all these cuss? 
If only you could hear me
Speak out in this whirlwind, 
Dear God.
I fall on MY knees and beg 
for mercy in case we are 
wrong where do I go from 
here if you have left me in
this confused land? 
You are the only refuge so 
Dear God tell where do I 

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  1. Date: 9/15/2011 4:00:00 AM
    A very good poem,,, and i ask many of the same questions myself.. thank you for sharing,..p.d.

  1. Date: 9/14/2011 12:48:00 AM
    Dear Ambrose, This is so prayerful and reverent to your God. He knows what we want before we even ask as our spirit communicates with His spirit. This is sooo lovely. I pray you are well tonight. Best to you, poet. Gwendolen

  1. Date: 9/3/2011 12:50:00 AM
    Powerful Piece Ambrose...luv...chiquita...smiles

  1. Date: 8/27/2011 12:46:00 PM
    What a wonderful start to my weekend reading your wonderful poetry. Thank you for sharing your writing Ambrose. Hope you are having a beautiful weekend. Love, Carol