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Damned in Oath

Romance surrounds us, 
Flowers blooming by our sides.
Echoing laughter being heard from below.

Dancing silhouettes,
In the flawless winds,
Discovering genuine peace.

Crows hovering above us,
As we say our loving vows to one another,
Looking to redeem our childhood memories.

Tick goes the clock,
As the mirror shatters,
I then say goodbye, to my one true love.

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  1. Date: 9/24/2013 9:38:00 PM
    you are a great poet do visit mine sumtyms ~V~

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 9:24:00 AM
    Art is subjective one cannot what is good or bad, only what one likes or dislikes. Your poem is very nicely written and has good imagery. But my criticism is this...I don't like your last line. Time is the true measure of all things, and I have heard many a story of a breakup from my brother who is a divorce lawyer. So take it with a grain of salt-- love changes with time and familiarity. Be careful.

  1. Date: 2/21/2013 4:16:00 PM
    Good poem, great imagery... Terry