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Crescent Witness

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                                         A crescent witness 
                                         holding its pale light in waves
                                         night of solitude
                                         On the shore of deep waters 
                                         the distance between          lands waits
                                         




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  1. Date: 3/8/2014 2:44:00 AM
    Great tanka, congrats...

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 7:58:00 AM
    You always have that creative twist that takes it above the norm Ruben!

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 8:47:00 AM
    Lovely tanka. Congrats.

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 10:12:00 PM
    Many many congrats for this wonderful win Ruben

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 3:06:00 PM
    Ex, Ruben congrats on your win...David

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 2:29:00 PM
    My honor to share this place with you...haven't we met somewhere before? Love this crescent beauty! :)

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 10:54:00 AM
    Very interesting...and beautiful...think I'll fav this one

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 9:52:00 AM
    God morning Ruben, thank you for the nice and beautiful poem, many blessings with your wonderful win~ PD

  1. Date: 10/23/2010 4:40:00 AM
    i love this acrostic. .somehow with'the cuchi,and the crescent and the past dedication,i find 3 in one acrostic. .tmfs!

  1. Date: 10/11/2010 10:00:00 PM
    This is simply gorgeous, Rueben!! I'm back here trying to find the older poems again. haha!!

  1. Date: 2/26/2010 12:56:00 PM
    Any mermaids of there , Ruben ??? ( post )..

  1. Date: 1/11/2010 10:16:00 AM
    I love the image this evokes--"crescent witness" is just so apt! Enjoyed this write Ruben, hoping to read more of your works :) Thanks again so much for all your inspiring comments :)

  1. Date: 9/24/2009 3:19:00 PM
    the ocean gives you a sense power. wonderful poem. luv it! keep it up!!!----Ell

  1. Date: 9/3/2009 10:08:00 AM
    Love the ocean maybe because I live on the prairies. God Bless Phyl

  1. Date: 8/31/2009 9:52:00 PM
    Romantic, Chanting deep waters...beautiful and powerful.

  1. Date: 8/27/2009 12:25:00 AM
    Love poems of the ocean. Delicious, write Ptolomeu! C

  1. Date: 8/26/2009 8:10:00 AM
    What a nice picture, Ruben: "Chanting deep waters hold the distance between lands in a night of solitude". Good job you've done here and thanks for your comments. Gert

  1. Date: 8/25/2009 6:34:00 AM
    The moon has witnessed many of events...... another great write!

  1. Date: 8/24/2009 1:23:00 PM
    This is the meaning of serenity. Thanks.

  1. Date: 8/23/2009 12:42:00 AM
    Have good day Ruben.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.

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