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I feel your strength around me
Controlling what I do
Making me helpless 
Vulnerable to you

You've bound my wrists together
The ribbons grip so tight
Hand around my neck
Reminding me it's all right

Bending me over the bed
One hand grasping my hair
I feel your fingers mingling
Lifting my head into the air

You caress my shoulders 
Lean over and nip me on the neck
Tell me that I need this
And just take me here

I am breathing heavy
Barely able to control my air
You are guiding my movement
Making me your own

Pushing me away from you
I do not understand why 
I'm thinking that you're done with me
Till I feel a snap

My back begins to tingle
I know what has come
Each strike takes me deeper
Into my world that no one sees

I'm fading with these strokes
A sting, a hand, a twitch,
Taking over me 
Losing that moment's sanity

A minute passes by
Not a strike to come
I'm left lying here
waiting for your touch

Then I feel you pull me back
Something different here
You ravage a new part of me
Bringing forth a tear

Breathing in so deeply
Your weight upon my back
Feeling you so gently
Thankful for just that

As my moans turn to pleasure
You claw into my hips
Feeling you inside me
Dip by dip

You body starts to tense
A primal scream releasing now
Shivering behind me
Hands around my throat

Slowly you release me
Exiting painfully
I fall forward weaker
Dropping to my knees

You lift me to my feet
Kiss me on the lips
Untie my hands and free me
Knowing I won't leave

I see in your eyes softness
Satisfaction in the air
This calm quiet moment
Created by our stares

Each time I find myself with you
I learn a new part of me
Of pain, of pleasure, my simple ecstasy
Your control is molding me

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  1. Date: 5/30/2013 7:48:00 AM
    All dates should be like this, eh? :) I enjoyed this ride. Nicely done.