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cold feet, warm feet

cold feet
warm feet

toes tingle
sole to sole
dancing foot loose
tangled ankles
feet frenzy

heat radiating
curling toes
to the heart line


it cannot be
just cannot be

for the string
is attached to
a ring

warm feet
cold feet


**haha ok all this feet talk prompted me to write this
gosh wanted to make this funny though? turned out 
to still be a boohoo write....

thanks Missy Neels for this feet fun! ^_^

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  1. Date: 5/4/2011 3:48:00 PM
    lol, nikko.. i'm a disaster.. should have placed "new poetic form" pero ang haba..... when i discovered this new form, i thougt it was also from whitney girl.. fatay!! oh well, let's see if i can do something about it.. thanks for the feedback; so valuable hearing it from you... haaay! thanks and huggs to ya! :) P S.. this piece you have is greeeat stuff!! free verse becomes you!

  1. Date: 4/26/2011 8:05:00 AM
    Hi Nikko! Hey, the title drew me to your write. You gave the entire foot a personality makeover in this lively poem. This is a neat expression--it cannot be--just cannot forgot your audience and focused inward! Nice trick. Have a great day. Who wrote the poem about being sick of rain. Was it u or Nette? We are getting ready to get pummeled again! Ohio River ready to burst! Gwendolen

  1. Date: 4/17/2011 11:16:00 AM
    Hey, I heard that snip sound too many times, its like cutting the power to the house.....silent darkness full of rain, only the sound of the rain, the pounding of the rain.:) Actually this one is more intimate.

  1. Date: 4/17/2011 4:17:00 AM
    Feet are tireless funny things yet even some of them are beauty, I happen to have gorgeous feet a gift from my Mom ;) I did not think this was too boo hoo but if you do! well send the feet, out in search of yet some others shoes! Light & Love

  1. Date: 4/11/2011 6:14:00 PM
    Hilarious way to write, bbbbooooohhhooo, nikko

  1. Date: 4/11/2011 4:40:00 PM
    Hey Nikko, funny funny write!!! And also thanks to Wilma!! Gusto ko sa iyo ng isang mahusay na linggo at salamat sa lahat ng iyong mga komento uri! Ako sa paggawa ng mas mahusay na ngunit ang ilang mga kalamnan sakit ay nananatiling!...Ingat ka lagi and Alles Gute!...Gert:)

  1. Date: 4/11/2011 3:22:00 PM
    lol You two made me smile alot, I could only imagine seeing you guys in the same room!!! You make poetry fun...thank you luv Michael ps I wrote one for you and Wilma

  1. Date: 4/11/2011 3:15:00 PM
    LOL Nikko, you and Wilma are keeping me laughing with this series on footsies. Very much enjoyed! Thanks again for my place in your contest. The poem on which the anagram was based took first place in a state collegiate competition judged by Princeton University professors. I'm glad you liked the "abbreviated" version. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 4/11/2011 2:17:00 PM
    Interesting work..If for a contest, good luck..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for selecting my work as a winner in your contest..It was interesting to find the anagrams of my names..Sara

  1. Date: 4/11/2011 5:36:00 AM
    hmmm, the nose of all body parts you could choose?? okay let me think about that one and get back to you... oops maybe I should do some work too hey? :D we are both insane :) but in a good way

  1. Date: 4/11/2011 5:19:00 AM
    btw, I do love the vid :)

  1. Date: 4/11/2011 5:18:00 AM
    hehe, you still had me smiling.. regardless of what you say, I still love how you twisted this one.. in the end this is reality at times.. Love it Missy Nikko ;) *hugs* let me see what other inspiring ideas you have for me :D