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Coffee Love

Swirling flakes
Needles on skin
Icicle nostrils
The Coffee Shop
Sitting there
Sweet tones of conversational music
Eyes like twin lasers
Target my heart
Deep connections 
Insides bursting
Endorphins raging
The girl of my dreams
Animated, flighty
Feisty, bouncy
Hair long and curly
(at that time, now long and straightened)

“I drank too much coffee”

I heard that right?
Is she interested in me
or just sensitive to caffeine?

After 14 years
Still drinking coffee

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  1. Date: 6/10/2013 9:33:00 AM
    Rick, Congratulations with your nice winning poem ... xox~ LINDA

  1. Date: 6/7/2013 10:56:00 AM
    thank you for choosing my contest. Congrats! ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 3/28/2013 12:33:00 PM
    This is a really catchy write with some lovely crystallized imagery. Are you from New England? Icy nostrils and coffee shops lead me to believe you possibly could be...

    Zablocki Avatar Rick Zablocki
    Date: 3/28/2013 12:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Not New England but Collingwood Ontario Canada on beautiful Georgian Bay. We love our coffee shops but can do with a few less wintry days.
  1. Date: 3/27/2013 5:28:00 PM
    Welcome Rick, wonderful tribute to coffee and how it makes you feel. I love the interaction with the girl.

  1. Date: 3/16/2013 12:07:00 AM
    Dear Rick, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. Congratulations on YOU Featured POEM "Coffee Love" Welcome to the Premium Members of POETRYSOUP. I am a coffee drinker too. 14 years and still drinking coffee - with the woman in YOUR POEM?? Superb Pen LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 3:57:00 AM
    caffeine is a stimulant. hmm, yes and then there's that. cheers!

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 7:53:00 PM
    nice one, coffee has been the inspiration of a few of my poens tt

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 5:29:00 AM
    Rick, welcome to the P-Soup. - I like your poem, you write very well. - Hope you will get much pleasure to share your thoughts and poems here with us. - Have a lovely Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 2/22/2013 5:46:00 PM
    Cute poem Rick, maybe she gets excited when she drinks too much coffee, you should ask her out on a date, to the coffee shop, a double espresso, vanilla latte, Yum! Nice write, xxx

    Zablocki Avatar Rick Zablocki
    Date: 2/22/2013 5:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you kindly Rose. My sweetie and I still love our caffeine jolts. :D