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Claimless Torch

I am submerged into your darkness

As I wait for your return.

Holding on to Amber claimless;

If I let go, you'll feel the burn.

You lit a torch into my vein,

But did you kindle it with care?

As the empty sky desists its reign,

Will it distend my hungry flare?

   If some of my latest work seems dark to you, it is because I am doing some medieval themes for my graphic arts business. This one is complete, but I'm having problems putting it in my blog.
I'm good, though! Much love, Ivy

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  1. Date: 7/25/2008 9:30:00 AM
    I just hate when my hungry flare gets distended. Dark write, well done. Vince

  1. Date: 7/25/2008 5:55:00 AM
    True, you are good! My friend writes some pretty gloomy stuf so I'm used to it. As for the medeival part I've written one poem with a medeival theme, I love 'em. Leah.

  1. Date: 7/24/2008 7:03:00 PM
    This poem is wonderful as is all your work - I relate real well to the darkness for most of my life it consumed me - Stay beautiful and stay strong inside - Your friend Michael

  1. Date: 7/24/2008 4:08:00 PM
    A very vivid and visual poem. Well written and great undertones of introspection. Well done. Regards Heidie

  1. Date: 7/24/2008 3:13:00 PM
    I am drawn to the darkness too. There is much beauty hidden there, alluring and sometimes too inviting. Loved this write. Glad you are well. Love you Ivy, Shar xoxo

  1. Date: 7/24/2008 2:43:00 PM
    Hi Ivy I like this write as I enjoy reading your writes, it seem as if there is a longing there, thanks for taking the time to read an comment on my writes, i have not been up here lately, take care D-nyce

  1. Date: 7/24/2008 11:44:00 AM
    The vivid imagery gives this poem an eerie feel which is fitting for the poem. The questions work well to add depth and give the reader something to ponder. Creative title. Thank you for sharing talent with us and for your kind comments on my poetry. Keep on writing! Karen

  1. Date: 7/24/2008 9:49:00 AM
    Sometimes the darkness is beautiful too, especially since it makes the light more contrasted. Enchanting poem -Sara

  1. Date: 7/24/2008 9:48:00 AM
    Ivy, hi! I don't find this read dark, but one that reflects a heart's yearning and questioning. This could be the questions many ask if they were to let go. The tone is perfect and the sentiment clearly conveyed. Very well written and good to read more of your work. Michael

  1. Date: 7/24/2008 9:47:00 AM
    Hi Ivy Truly enjoyed. Very heartfelt and deep. The medeival theme suites you very well. Your unique percpective really brings forth your poetic heart in this outstanding write. Good luck with your business it sounds wonderful! Take care hun...Love Light Truth Patricia