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Charlotte Russe

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© G. V. 11-24-2013, All Rights Reserved
(humorous-Iambic pentameter)


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Charlotte Russe


The rain began with striking thunder noise,
the falling drops were pelting on his head;
his bomber's jacket, after shave and poise
anticipated just, her tall spikes' tread.

Her stumbling light steps were quick and graced;
- oh, sightly maid, that fondling drops wet,
he smiles; she smiles, so rarified and laced,
her acrobatic charm and walking fret.

Her wet, Venusian bends enthrall his brain;
those curvatures must be explored and felt,
his tips will tangle in her moistened mane,
her feminine perfume and garter belt!

Athletic is his run upon the quay,
as lightning strikes around, of Zeus wrath,
in style he throws his rendezvous bouquet,
her manicured lithe fingers long to catch!

A flash demolishes the rose bouquet,
another strikes upon his buckle's brass;
resembling Nureyev at ballet
with Dame Fonteyn, he proves his dancing class!

She joins his dance beneath November's rain;
thus, he forebodes her lustful flames and cries,
uncorking the Dom Pérignon champagne,
receives a third flash on his manly prize.

Embraced they dance beneath the rain and kiss
Mille-feuille creamed her finger tips, will fuss 
to tease his buds, while deponent his lips
descend to slowly taste her "Charlotte Russe".

© 11-24-2013, All Rights Reserved
(humorous-erotic-light poetry-Iambic pentameter)

Sponsor: Charlotte Puddifoot
Contest Name: Charlotte's Scorchers: Erotic/Sensual Poetry 

Definitions:

* Mille-feuille:
The mille-feuille is a creamy pastry of French origin.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mille-feuille

* Charlotte Russe:
Charlotte Russe is a cold dessert of Bavarian cream set 
in a mold lined with ladyfingers.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Charlotte_%28cake%29

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  1. Date: 1/1/2014 6:44:00 PM
    The title could also have been 'November's Rain', but 'Charlotte Russe' is fine, kind of more suggestive. Came to read this one again,, don't think I left a comment last time..well, now I am... Very sensual!..is all I'll say. And yes, very potent too, as the contest certainly demanded.

  1. Date: 12/11/2013 9:58:00 AM
    good morning Giorgio,,, .. Congratulations in "'Charlotte's Scorchers: Erotic/Sensual Poetry''...have a nice one... LUV LINDA

  1. Date: 12/8/2013 4:18:00 PM
    For sure a winner!!! I remember this one well. Congrats to you.

  1. Date: 12/8/2013 9:13:00 AM
    My great honor to read this once again my dear friend, Giorgio. Loving and enjoying it as always! TYSM again for sharing & my biggest hearty congratulations on your great win! love lots and big hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 12/7/2013 7:33:00 PM
    delightful poem Giorgio a fine pen congrats on win Shadow x smile hug

  1. Date: 12/7/2013 7:25:00 PM
    Enjoyed very much...congratulations!

  1. Date: 12/7/2013 5:47:00 PM
    aww giorgio, how could I not fall in love with this one!? it brought a smile, I enjoyed it immensely; a witty 'sweet' take on the theme - congrats on your win! :)

  1. Date: 12/2/2013 11:18:00 AM
    Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this work today..Reads like a great dessert..Sara

  1. Date: 12/1/2013 4:07:00 PM
    Of course I have to favour such effervescent beauty which sizzles from the grill in ardent splendour.-to my favs

  1. Date: 11/28/2013 10:17:00 AM
    This is superbly beautiful, passionate and excellent poem giving me big smiles my very dear friend Giorgio. What else can I say? Well A super winner for sure. Thank u so much for sharing! Good luck always. I'd like also to take this opportunity to thank u my dear fried for your inspiring comments on our collab poem with our very dear friend Linda & esp. thank u so much for the help you've extended to us. Biggest hugs to u my dearest friend! More blessings to u & ur love ones! love lots always, Leonora

  1. Date: 11/27/2013 4:14:00 AM
    Hi there, yes very sensual Giorgio, a winner I am sure. Thanks for taking the time to read my work it is much appreciated xx

  1. Date: 11/26/2013 5:00:00 PM
    Very charming and romantic, as well as humorous! An excellent poem, Giorgio, I am sure that Charlotte will love this one! I would wish you good luck, but I don't think you will need it!...Thank you very, very much for the wonderful congrats on my poem. I really do appreciate the fave! I am honored! :)

  1. Date: 11/26/2013 11:53:00 AM
    Hi Giorgio, An awesome sensual write..Well done.. Ken

  1. Date: 11/26/2013 11:10:00 AM
    Sensuality at its sensual finest. I would have liked to know how flavorful he found her "Charlotte Russe" and how it responded. I'm greedy, huh? lol. Beautiful writing, as ever, Mr Wordsmythe. Licia :-)

  1. Date: 11/25/2013 7:31:00 AM
    totally hot! I hope it was written for someone.

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V.
    Date: 11/25/2013 5:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you. It was actually written to be submitted in a contest, that's why I offered emphasis on the light and funny poetry element. :)
  1. Date: 11/25/2013 5:01:00 AM
    Very well expressed feelings of sensuality with lovely images, Giorgio

  1. Date: 11/24/2013 4:05:00 PM
    - Leaving your poem with a sweet feeling, after reading your beautiful poem Giorgio ! - Luck in contest!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/24/2013 3:03:00 PM
    Smoldered, awesome, Giorgio! I like it :).

  1. Date: 11/24/2013 2:54:00 PM
    Yes, I believe this one fits the description of sensual to a T !!! I sure enjoyed your entry to the contest.

  1. Date: 11/24/2013 1:38:00 PM
    winsome in tonality and mood, yet still sensual in its charade, G... splendidly written!..:) huggs