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Chanting you

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Chanting you

Last night I sketched you out yet again
Your lost silence wrapped around my mind
Your voice hovered, its spell soothing dizzy heights
Chanting possibilities, in fevered distances

Would you wake up to magic, I wonder
Your freedom scarred by your own captive goals
Wood-fires whisper waiting secrets, your warmth
The enchantment spiralling, waiting for you to wake

Forget your world please, for a brief eternity
Our lives would soar, your destinations reworked
I guard your time unknown, quenching riddles
Hunt with me a while, till our mystery rests…

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  1. Date: 10/30/2014 12:30:00 PM
    This is a dazzler, Bindu! It is rich in content, deeply expressive, and feels that it flowed out of your pen effortlessly. You offer a world of possibilities. Beautiful! // paul

  1. Date: 10/23/2014 7:05:00 AM
    You should repost this one, it is an exceptional piece.

  1. Date: 9/21/2014 3:12:00 PM
    embracing beautiful such amazing writing

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 10:54:00 PM
    Well done Bindu, I truly loved that sentence about 'Your freedom scarred by your own captive goals' So many people in this position. Loved the read....Peter

  1. Date: 10/21/2013 4:58:00 PM
    You are so good at these romantic pieces, I felt these words wrap around me. I imagined them eminating from my lovers lips.