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contest: "carousel in roundel"
sponsor: nette oncloud
placement: 1st

roundel poetic form:

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carousel in roundel

The carousel round goes her lyrics' gist
as solitude dispels the odor of primrose
- two Tango dancing figures fade in mists
- the carousel round goes. 

And the enfolding of the silence slows,
in truth advances her responses kissed,
betimes the corteges of night depose.

Disporting round trajectories persist,
their merriment of altered times disclose; 
- Two loving forms in downpour dance amidst, 
- the carousel round goes. 

© G. Venetopoulos, 08-04-2013, All rights reserved
(roundel - Iambic pentameter, Iambic trimeter)

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  1. Date: 8/23/2013 2:24:00 PM
    Congratulations Giorgio, your no. 1 today, xxx

  1. Date: 8/21/2013 7:19:00 AM
    what a beauty, giorgio..congrats and do comment on my blog.. i wrote about you..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 8/21/2013 4:12:00 AM
    Good creative winning work..Congrats.Sara

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 8:51:00 PM
    well deserved. Giorgio, congratulations in the CAROUSEL IN ROUNDEL contest... SKAT

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 4:02:00 PM
    Lovely the primrose....

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 1:02:00 PM
    Congratulations Georgio on your 1st place win!Beautiful poem.

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 8:36:00 AM
    Way to go, great win!

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 7:16:00 AM
    Georgio, you write with such a flair--well deserved first!

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 11:33:00 PM
    Congrats Giorgio.....loved your poem ...Seren

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 10:52:00 PM
    Many congrats on your win. A wonderful write.

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 7:22:00 PM
    Congrats on your win. Morgan

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 6:53:00 PM
    Wonderful ride you took us on !! Congratulations!!

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 4:33:00 PM
    Hello G. Thanks for the wonderful "CAROUSEL" ride.... Congratulations with your winning poem in Nette's contest. always & forever *PD

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 2:56:00 PM
    Big congrats to you, always well metered poetry!!

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 3:28:00 PM
    way to take a ride on the merry go round challenge. I hope you catch a big score with this lilting poem. And thanks for my placement in your last contest.

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 9:50:00 AM
    You get my part of the Florida vote... Great entry..... Jake

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 8:54:00 AM
    Loved it... a good write! Thanks for sharing! Cheers from Canada!

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 8:15:00 AM
    A fine poem. Should do well in the contest. btw, thanks for my placement in your contest. Have a nice one!!

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 7:20:00 AM
    Wonderful write and combination of the carousal and poignant character depiction. Good luck for the competition.

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 7:17:00 AM
    Interesting contest entry..Reads like winning material to me..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for the visit to my work..Sara