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Captured-..The Spirit Wind

Captured…..the Spirit Wind 

 (tribute to “My spirit you” by Colin Mitchell Williams)

when you paint a portrait of this love
      it is exquisitely artistic 
moving souls with words…
splashed on the canvass of this page
like it bled from within your soul
                  like it spilled from you
from an always pouring faucet
coming from the deepest well….

           blatant and caressing
tumultuous and arousing
it comes arrayed in many hues
sprinkles softly like golden dust
poured on feminine hearts
stained with passion
red and pink (your blooming heart) 
fervent with heat
sultry and captivating….
much like summer breezes
on balmy beaches
you are passion refined
defined as profound

you speak of this love that rests inside
(one like you say you have never known)

    she is lovely you say….

“Now you are like a blue girl
Dressed in summer clothes
Laughing in the sunshine
Playing on the swings of my heart
Rising to the heavens
And out beyond the stars”

how touching those lines!

we see her through your eyes of love
those shining eyes of bliss

she counts herself lucky I would say…
      what woman would not?

a woman could but only wish
that she could hold a mans heart
that beats with a constant beat
that captures such staggering
        and brilliant colors

erotically tender…
how you describe her
we can see her in your eyes
and it feels like love should feel
constant like the sun
ever moving like the current
in a California river

going somewhere on the trees
magic in the wind
beneath a bright iridescent sky
blasting out a soothing blue 

you speak of love as it should be
it makes a woman hope 
that fairy tales just might come true 

If I could enter my own contest right now this is what i would enter. What can i say?"My Spirit 
You" is a beautiful poem :) Thank you, Colin, for the inspiration....

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  1. Date: 5/12/2009 1:42:00 PM
    :) Still and always will be hoping and believing in the fairy tale ..... it will come true.

  1. Date: 5/7/2009 8:05:00 AM
    An artistic way of crafting an excellent material like this one. Lots of colors and emotions! Very creative indeed! You're my second favorite poet and this piece.

  1. Date: 5/1/2009 4:58:00 PM
    Poetic, descriptive and flowing. A fit tribute. Blended in lights and wisdom. Nicely written.

  1. Date: 4/24/2009 12:56:00 PM
    P.S. Christie,...great tribute ! james

  1. Date: 4/24/2009 12:51:00 PM
    Christie,...ok,..I have spilled for others words,..but truly,...this is the hyacinth I bend for,...the refined poetic oder I long for! Yes,..there are many great poets,....thank you for correcting me*smiles* love james

  1. Date: 4/22/2009 9:18:00 AM
    You are a great romantic ... and one worthy of the words written here ... a magnificient poem. Thanks for your comments on my poem, you are pure class, and I toil to be accepted here.

  1. Date: 4/22/2009 5:26:00 AM
    wonderfully written.. a great tribute

  1. Date: 4/21/2009 4:30:00 PM
    Beautifully written, Christie, and a tribute to one of the Soup's greatest writers. Colin deserves this recognition. Bless you for providing it! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 4/21/2009 3:07:00 AM
    Great tribute and writing Christie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

  1. Date: 4/20/2009 11:43:00 AM
    Passionate words..great job and nice tribute...Raul

  1. Date: 4/20/2009 11:16:00 AM
    Speechless. I think the inspiration, admiration and respect you and Colin have for each other, due to the fact you are similar souls experiencing similar life situations (generally speaking, as what do I know) is an on going gift to both of you, and to us, the reader. I do too, believe fairy tales come true, because they do. Hope you both find that out. Love, Shar

  1. Date: 4/20/2009 6:54:00 AM
    His poem is so deserving the is overflowing with such honest emotion and devotion. Your poem, this wonderful tribute, would win your own contest, dear beautiful in itself...such gifted writers are both of lucky we are to be able to read and relish your talents...both of you put me in awe! Love, Carrie

  1. Date: 4/20/2009 6:36:00 AM
    Christie what a wonderful tribute to a wonderful poem - The new one he just posted is also "AMAZING" - It is wonderful to hear of such love - Sometimes I wish my wife was a poetry person - It saddens my heart how little they mean to her - Anyhow I didn't mean to go into all of that - as always your poetry is amazing - God Bless you hon,YF4L - mj

  1. Date: 4/20/2009 6:17:00 AM
    Well I for one will always believe somewhere deep inside myself that fairy tales can come true. ~

  1. Date: 4/20/2009 6:01:00 AM
    Now I have to read Colin's write. I have not yet done so but this one is... WOW, beautiful. It is so flowing and gentle, truly like the wind. Great writing. Smiles from Lolita

  1. Date: 4/20/2009 6:00:00 AM
    This is like a driving waltz, with self as partner, surging on and on. The title of the waltz?......."My Heart on My Sleeve." Love this one. Love, daver

  1. Date: 4/20/2009 5:51:00 AM
    Hi Christie..... I cannot thank the inspiration behind the poem "My Spirit You" .... I cannot thank her enough..... for that. But I thank you from the bottom of my heart for this poem... I am moved, touched and honored, Thank you. Love Col