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Capricorn, the mountain climber

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Capricorn, the mountain climber

Capricorn the mountain climber

The goat he is relentless
He'll cimb the higest hill
Just a wee bit at a time
With his gigantic will
He tends to take life seriously
But he can laugh at his own self
This man will try to seek his fortune
And accumulate some wealth.

He be the father of this Earth
He likes to take control
And sometimes he will be considered
As drab, and often dull
He's reliable, you can count on him
When you need to get things done
He'll often work so very hard
He'll forget to have some fun.

He has a lot of patience
And he can put his mind
A hundred percent on anything
And him you'll often find
Working out some problem
Until he gets it right
And for the people in his life
He'll put up quite a fight.

23 September 2013 @ 1422hrs.

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  1. Date: 9/23/2013 8:44:00 PM
    What an intresting write, Peter very intresting indeed. I like it a lot! :) very powerful and such a topic to write about! Very creative write, I love it! :)

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 9/24/2013 3:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Richard, your faith in my writing even rubs off on me sometimes, I appreciate, my friend...Peter
  1. Date: 9/23/2013 11:26:00 AM
    Interesting write, Peter....Powerful and full of umph! :)

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 9/23/2013 3:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much Ilene, your comments are highly appreciated....Peter
  1. Date: 9/23/2013 5:18:00 AM
    that is so true i am a capicorn excellent piece i tip my hat i have one just up your street [duck ] if you want a laugh true story show how i would do anything for a laugh

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 9/23/2013 3:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Liam, I will check 'Duck' out, it is never too early for a laugh...Peter