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But I Can't Make you love me

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But I Can't Make you love me

I watch the trees another cooling 
breeze you're packed in the morning 
sunlight waiting for a cab. Morning 
thunder slowly fades as life goes back
to catch the day, the sun still sings
for many years I've tried to win your 
heart and soul. As the yellow roses 
bloom through the fields... For only
that which burns is fire.

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  1. Date: 9/24/2013 5:24:00 AM
    Nice inner thoughts of feelings well expressions, julie

  1. Date: 9/23/2013 2:05:00 PM
    intrested in this contest. i have personal experience. but i think what you've writen will serve the purpose. it is what you have. so serve it.