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Below is the poem entitled BUBBLY MOMENTS which was written by poet nette onclaud. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Soap bubbles float through high-school breeze that chuckles on playful moonlights; our gang dabs round film on oak trees or paste white orbs on teen boys' kites. And vapor-like, our summers wrap the peek-a-boos squeaking tag games, on dappled field where guys eavesdrop inviting tricks without a shame. Long day collects a popping spree, as sticky piles knot wavy hair like rustle of sun, how carefree to mess around till burnt cheeks flare. The thrill of puppy love upswings when every hour is like a race while globules fly, my crush then zings till cheery arms steal quick embrace. Christian Guild's Teenager Entertainment by nette onclaud

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  1. Date: 10/4/2013 10:08:00 PM
    A wonderful poem to read tonight! I am feeling young and carefree again. Have a blessed weekend, Nette, Rhonda

  1. Date: 10/4/2013 9:31:00 PM
    This is a an excellent poem giving a nostalgic feeling my dear friend Nette! Kudos & big hugs always on your excellent poem! thank you so much for sharing & for stopping by on my blogs n the advance greetings. I was too early to post my blogs thinking that my pm expires last 2nd but still lighted. I think someone made magic;)))). Again, thank you so much. I'll come back to read more cuz I'll meet my cousin today. take care always! God bless! love lots & big hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 10/4/2013 5:24:00 PM
    This is so sweet, brings back memories of youth.

  1. Date: 10/4/2013 3:52:00 PM
    Another wonderful poem, Nette :) Great write! Love, Juli-Michelle

  1. Date: 10/4/2013 1:45:00 PM
    What a joy to read this poem Nette!Love it very much!!

  1. Date: 10/4/2013 11:25:00 AM
    excellent piece of writing really enjoyed you vision

  1. Date: 10/3/2013 8:08:00 PM
    This write expressed the puppy love that we have all encountered while we were younger! It was very strong but quite fleeting at the same time! I truly enjoyed reading this delightful poem this evening! What a tenderhearted piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 10/3/2013 2:50:00 PM
    This is a beautiful and happy poem nette :) I noticed that "eavesdrop" word, which blends ideally in your verse. Thank you so much for posting your elegant and pretty poetry, for us to read! Smiles! G.

  1. Date: 10/3/2013 1:53:00 PM
    The sense of joy and young love! There was nothing as lovely as puppy love! Until the tears fell ! :)