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Broken Heart

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Broken Heart

The day we met, you rock 
Strongly felt that, you duke
Stunned I stand alone there
Notions think over, you folk
Said! I am in love, she laughs
Didn’t mind to think, you joke 
Anxious always to talk to her
Don’t disturb me! You yoke
Why your ignoring me I asked
Go away please! You poke
Wanted you to be my princess
Don’t dare disgusting, you mock
Never hurt you or give a sorrow
Ever smile for me, you evoke 
Requested her not to leave me
Betray me badly, you oak
Don’t break my heart, cant bear
Regret love madly, you broke

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  1. Date: 12/7/2012 7:11:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Sandy Ivy's "Viewing Life" contest Ahsan. Love Carol

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 6:35:00 PM
    Congratulation Ahsan on your win :D

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 6:13:00 PM
    A K. :-) CONGRATULATIONS ON A POEM WELL DONE..... ALWAYS & FOREVER~ linda

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 4:29:00 PM
    Congrats :-) Sandy

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 6:26:00 AM
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  1. Date: 1/24/2012 12:55:00 AM
    I enjoyed this passionate interchange between love and hate that just surged deep into one's soul. in regards to your question, why emptiness? Do we not begin always from an empty paper? ^.~ regardless that also it brings me closer to what I longed most. Thanks for your visit and kind comments.

  1. Date: 1/20/2012 3:04:00 AM
    Happiness in life is to be two!oxox Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 1/20/2012 12:37:00 AM
    WOW; very great and profound writing and emotions. Keep up the good work :)