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Breath To Death - Haiku

- triassic thunder echoes through fire storm and rain triceratops falls - blackened sediment dripping slow rusty waters' one mammoth unearthed - ~Wonderment~ crowded museum children straining, gazing high huge bones stand silent - ________________________ A P.D. Contest Poet-Rick Parise

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/30/2012 3:54:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in P.D's "Dinosaur" contest ^Rick. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/29/2012 9:06:00 PM

congrats Ricdk on a fantastic win for this dino delight luv..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/29/2012 6:56:00 PM

Rick,~.Congratulations ;-) with your awesome win THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING ;-) my contest... Enjoyed your entry,~ always & forever*PD

Joann Grisetti

Date: 3/19/2012 8:22:00 AM

Great images in these haiku. I enjoy your poems.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/17/2012 10:04:00 AM

A winner in contest....good luck ! - Have a lovely weekend! - oxox love Anne-Lise

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/17/2012 9:01:00 AM

Good morning, RICK,,, aweee,,, love the image in your haiku,,, thank you,, "HAPPY ST PATRICK DAY TO YOU , GOD BLESS~ ALWAYS PD ;-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/16/2012 9:19:00 PM

thankfully I put my name on my entry for her other contest, but I had forgotten she had still not judged the previous contest before it. Completely skipped my mind to put my name on the nature destroyer haiku!!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/16/2012 9:16:00 PM

WOWOWOW, what an amazing series for that contest. PUT your NAME on it, Rick. I left my name off one of her last contests even though it did not say we had to put our name on it, but at her blog the other day, she told everyone that without a name you could not get a proper placement. I looked at the other HM's and it seemed that is what we all had in common.