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© G. V., 08-02-2013, All Rights Reserved

Contest: Epic
Sponsor: PD
Placement: 1st - Thank you.

volant peau = leather steering wheel
Third Fate: Atropos was the 3rd fate (after Lachesis and Clotho),
and she determined the end of life of the mortals.
durst = verb Archaic. simple past tense of dare.
thither = there
cometh = comes
Besought = a simple past tense and past participle of beseech.
1. to implore urgently: They besought him to go at once.
2. to beg eagerly for; solicit.
verb (used without object)
3. to make urgent appeal: Earnestly did I beseech, but to no avail.
Benedictine = The oldest recorded sparkling wine is Blanquette de Limoux, which was apparently invented by Benedictine Monks in the Abbey of Saint Hilaire, near Carcassonne in 1531.
uniforme = French "uniform". The difference is that the tone of the French word is on the 1st syllable, to maitain a perfect Iamb.

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Besought of honors durst

Besought of honors durst on edge to live
what cometh through insights and traction's hold
the wrought not to deny or to misgive
hence thither's naught to doubt in mountain's cold.

Above the limits race where speed defines
what pre-existed on the drives and pikes 
betrothal wraith among all deaths consigns
and sacrificial power chords she strikes.

Therefore the strenuous of engine's wrath
unfolds trajectories of epic drive
tangential dance upon demanding path
his hands on peau volant, race-concert thrive.

How tall a man should be on sovereign roads 
that challenge souls impertinent to rave
on sacrificial offering that goads
third fate's lithe dancing steps atop his grave?

Untamed the turbocharged propulsion roars,
the engine hollers its titanic torque,
celestial ticket bought in skies to soar
Dom Pérignon is his champagne's last cork.

Intruder of the mountain's nightly gale
the peak performing turbocharger breathes
combustion thrusts the engine to travail
how glory turns mechanical and wreathes!

It's after midnight and the slope's romance  
redeems red droplets on his uniforme
his slight of smile exceeds the ambulance
since ten to one besought, killed in the storm.

© 08-02-2013, G. Venetopoulos All rights reserved
(Iambic pentameter, Epic)

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  1. Date: 1/2/2014 8:59:00 PM
    Awesome Giorgio...congratulations

  1. Date: 12/25/2013 11:22:00 PM
    Congratulations to you in this contest of such exceptional writing! and hope you had a merry Christmas.

  1. Date: 12/24/2013 10:35:00 PM
    You're so intelligent, Giorgio. It amazes me to read your works! Congrats!

  1. Date: 12/24/2013 9:23:00 PM
    Beautiful piece,Giorgio-the master of meter poetry...Congrats on your win and Merry Xmas...

  1. Date: 12/24/2013 4:24:00 PM
    An outstanding piece of writing. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 12/24/2013 12:09:00 AM
    Enjoyed your beautiful write on a portrait of a poet and congratulations on the win, GV

  1. Date: 12/23/2013 6:35:00 PM
    Congratulations and Merry Christmas! RAY

  1. Date: 12/23/2013 12:28:00 PM
    Congrats Giorgio on your fantastic win! Excellent piece of writing, loved it. Thank you so much for your participation. huggs... G

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V.
    Date: 12/23/2013 3:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for honoring me Gautami! Huggs to you, too!
  1. Date: 12/13/2013 1:00:00 PM
    Thank you friends! :) G.

  1. Date: 9/25/2013 6:19:00 AM
    - I looked into the past winners list .. where I found this .... a first place!! - Well deserved!! - CONGRATULATIONS,GIORGIO !!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 9/25/2013 4:22:00 AM
    Congrats on the first place win in the contest, Giorgio

  1. Date: 9/24/2013 6:39:00 PM
    There is so much in you, you never cease to put it out there for our enjoyment, congratulations, on an excellent verse, xxx,

  1. Date: 9/24/2013 6:24:00 PM
    7 & & !! Great win , well deserved !

  1. Date: 9/24/2013 5:58:00 PM
    This poem brought to mind thoughts of James Dean. Because of how he loved to drive fast and live on the edge, almost defying death. This was an excellent poem for the "epic" contest, especially with words like "titanic". It was very deserving of the top spot! Congratulations to you, as well. I am honored to share first place with you!

  1. Date: 9/24/2013 4:45:00 PM
    beautiful #1 poem G. V. ,Congrats................. Love~SKAT~

  1. Date: 9/24/2013 4:39:00 PM
    congrats on a fine win and lovely epic Shadow x smile

  1. Date: 9/24/2013 3:21:00 PM
    even in its sadness this piece shines through beautifully...congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 9/24/2013 11:29:00 AM
    Hello, Giorgio , :)Congratulations!!! Thanks for supporting my EPIC contest with this amazing deep imagery. Exactly what I was looking for. If you'd like:-) stop by my latest poem ""In The Stars"" OR my latest blog! " Wartime Memories " at -----> always & forever **&LINDA

  1. Date: 8/9/2013 7:17:00 AM
    Thank you for your beautiful comments and faith in me. I promise that I'll never betray your trust. Giorgio

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V.
    Date: 8/9/2013 2:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I loved this piece, too. A rare poetic performance, meant to be comprehended only by gifted writers.
  1. Date: 8/3/2013 11:58:00 PM
    You do write beautifully..This poem is sad but yep..beautiful and I do believe Andrea s going to love it.Have a wonderful morning G-C.C