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Inattentive child, cries for his balloon,
Star shaped indigo, orbiting the moon.
Dancing among the iridescent stars,
To join the celestial heavens afar.
Floating errantly in the azure sky,
The string waves a melancholy good-bye.

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  1. Date: 6/7/2012 9:42:00 PM
    Lisa, awe~ I would cry to for my balloon,,, but, than i would accept.. how could i not, with the beautiful float on it's way... congrats on your win..pd

  1. Date: 6/7/2012 8:44:00 PM
    how cute that last line of the sting waving goodbye This is precious, Lisa. Congrats on your worthy win.

  1. Date: 6/7/2012 2:33:00 PM
    Very expressive and descriptive work..Enjoyed reading a winner..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 6/7/2012 2:29:00 PM
    Great personification ;) Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 6/7/2012 5:25:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in the 181 contest Lisa. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/7/2012 3:13:00 AM
    Beautiful!Congrats on your win Lisa.

  1. Date: 6/7/2012 1:35:00 AM
    Very nice poem... congrats on your win... Terry

  1. Date: 6/3/2012 11:15:00 AM
    Great poem!!!

  1. Date: 6/3/2012 10:46:00 AM
    Lisa, very good, I love the image here..David

  1. Date: 6/3/2012 10:46:00 AM
    I almost feel like the child you are talking about in this piece Lisa, this is a beauty.. Love the imagery as well :) Wilma