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Autumn Kiss


                                                 soft breeze drops
                                                 red leaf on lips— 
                                                 smile in siesta


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  1. Date: 12/20/2011 7:34:00 AM
    Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and yours Ruben. Love and blessings, Carol

  1. Date: 10/25/2011 1:51:00 PM
    Smile, *^_^* “My Dear Brother John & I Were Reminiscing The Other Day On His Fifth Anniversary Here At PoetrySoup & He Had Mentioned A Few Poets Here From Days Gone By Whom He Had Both Admired & Even Loved & Your Name Was Amongst They So Thought I Would Do A Tiny Tour of The Site & Walla, Here You Are My Dear Precious Ruben! * Love The Peaceful Easy Feeling Amid This Lovely Verse My Friend *^_^* Tis A Fiestas Moment I Can Surely See or I Should Say, Feel!” === My Love, Always, Jasper *

  1. Date: 7/9/2011 1:19:00 PM
    you're missed ;) Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/8/2011 4:13:00 AM
    So beautiful, Ruben. Miss you here at the soup. Lainie

  1. Date: 11/16/2010 5:38:00 AM
    That image of a child asleep, that image of a leaf fallen to stillness, that image carved from the senses of the soul ... how exceedingly transcendental

  1. Date: 11/5/2010 11:54:00 PM
    You caught me off guard again. Should know by now I can't second guess you. Charles

  1. Date: 11/5/2010 8:52:00 PM
    such wonderfully chosen words placed so very well for this Haiku,,expresslively described of autumn,,I want to say I am sorry that it has taken me so very long to read any of your words,I have missed them a lot,,i also want to Thank you for all your visits and for all your words that you left behind,,,Blessings..Cecil

  1. Date: 10/30/2010 10:25:00 AM
    smiles as I read this short but sweet haiku. Ruben! lovely siesta!! Happy Halloween to you :) --nikko :)

  1. Date: 10/27/2010 8:40:00 AM
    Hey Ruben, Appreciate you reading my writes, my friend and all the encouragement. Always appreciated! .....Jimmy

  1. Date: 10/26/2010 4:02:00 AM
    Hóla Ruben! You've penned a lovely Haiku here! And it left me smiling! Y gracias por tus comentarios!!! Que tengas una buena semana!...Your friend Gert

  1. Date: 10/24/2010 11:49:00 PM
    :p behave whino rhino :p

  1. Date: 10/24/2010 9:48:00 PM
    hahaha. So you were trying so hard to make me laugh but I was commenting on the winners of my contest. That was even funnier! realized right away what you were doing with that wino rhino line repeating everywhere. Very funny, Rueben, very funny!!

  1. Date: 10/24/2010 3:39:00 PM
    Simply dreamy Ruben >> James

  1. Date: 10/24/2010 2:39:00 PM usual, Ruben. (Never mad at Ruben...just distracted by the world of flowers. Sorry you thought so.) Lovingly, Dane Ann

  1. Date: 10/24/2010 2:08:00 PM
    What a sweet image in your fall haiku, my friend. Very nicely done, Ruben! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 10/24/2010 1:48:00 PM
    This has a gentle feel to it Ruben, left me smiling ;) Wilma

  1. Date: 10/24/2010 11:36:00 AM
    hey, thanks for adding me as a favorite poet!! you are already on my list! Enjoyed reading your works.

  1. Date: 10/24/2010 6:51:00 AM
    Soft and light.. romantic and sweet .. and no I am not the 'jealous' type of "Sweetheart" Ruben.. I know how difficult it is to comment back to everyone and u get so many reads don't know how u do it luv.. your poetry is super fantastic.. like this which says so much in three lines and gives us all the 'urge'..haha..

  1. Date: 10/24/2010 6:04:00 AM
    Enjoyed the descriptive quality of this one..Says so much in so few words..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work about the horse..Sara

  1. Date: 10/23/2010 9:38:00 PM
    This is wonderful, Rueben. And the title is perfectly fitting. Gotta love those siestas!! (thanks, too, for supporting my blogs) LUv, Andrea