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Atropos twine

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Atropos twine


Bequest from far, my lone star blinks
The ghosts wear masks that smile and flirt
lives are domains of the same links
entwine their resolute, lost worth.

My truth adverts; enthroned wedding
incitement vows - Atropos' threading.

The fates impend while reasons quell
mind's garden waits for rain and dew;
Lost souls would trade their barren well
- embrace the vast of ocean blue.

Unsown the border, misconceives,
attracts me where the fate deceives.

Expanding norms, my thoughts that err
conceived you are mine - appointee
I missed our twined, engulfing flare
your soul received my cadence fee.

It was your stare and levels three
one thorn to love - twinge of sundial
imprisoned solitude and free,
where ether shaped your denial.

© G. V. 09-09-2011

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  1. Date: 5/1/2013 7:34:00 AM
    Interesting work that you have penned..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for your visit..Your comments were uplifting..Sara

  1. Date: 4/29/2013 12:20:00 AM
    this is really a great work of art. this is pure art

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V.
    Date: 4/30/2013 5:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you poet!
  1. Date: 4/28/2013 7:42:00 PM
    G V, you are a poet of fine print. Almost like Shakespeare, wow! This kind of reminds me a myth I read called "Thaleus and Reagos." very lovely. Linda

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V.
    Date: 4/30/2013 5:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you! :) :)
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    Date: 4/28/2013 7:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    me of a myth <--typo