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At That Age

At that age, I'd no idea what would come, If it would be love, bursting heart's seems. Which was why it was so wonderful, Being 13, with no worries, only dreams. . Falling in love with every boy, A new one to obsess over, nearly every week ! It wasn't easy, but enjoyable, Being so sure of myself; being strong, and not Weak. Now that I look back, I feel so aged~ Even only being almost three years older. But that year made me what I am today, Not just prepared, but, honestly- bolder.
For Contest: ...AT THAT AGE Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud By: Dana'lynn Smith

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/18/2012 12:21:00 AM
Nice write :-)
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Date: 1/16/2012 1:16:00 PM
A belated congratulations on your win in Nette's "At This Age" contest Dana'lynn. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/14/2012 7:34:00 AM
Beautiful poem Dana..you are a great poet at a very young age.Congrats on your win.
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Date: 1/13/2012 11:16:00 PM
oh, my , you are still so young. And you write SO well. You have MUCh in store for you, young lady. Congratulations on this win!
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Date: 1/13/2012 9:05:00 PM
Wow, Danalynn, this is wonderful. A mature write, this. The last line is great. Keep writing! You have talent. Cheers, Cyndi
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Date: 1/13/2012 5:45:00 PM
Dana'lynn, this is so sweetly written. It deserved to win in Nette's contest.
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Date: 1/12/2012 9:11:00 AM
Hi Dana, love this, telling it as it is, love this. harry
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Date: 1/11/2012 8:36:00 PM
Dana, i know how it feels.... good luck in the contest,,..p.d.
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Date: 1/11/2012 7:57:00 PM
Wonderful coming of age poem...enjoyed !!
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