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as nightwalk grows bleak

as nightwalk grows dim…

firefly shimmers on  pale breaths

 awakening  chi

*chi-- life energy

Marvin Celestial's Haiku On Enlightenment
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  1. Date: 8/17/2014 8:07:00 AM
    Thought provoking and introspective write on enlightenment, nette

  1. Date: 8/17/2014 5:25:00 AM
    Transformational! I like the contrast between " dim" and "shimmer", then the final awakening... You excel, Nette!

  1. Date: 8/17/2014 5:20:00 AM
    - Great haiku, Nette ! - Luck in contest ! - oxox // Anne-Lise <3 U!!

  1. Date: 8/17/2014 1:25:00 AM
    Awesome haiku Nette ! Love the energetic chi , n the way how u used it for enlightenment!

  1. Date: 8/16/2014 10:54:00 PM
    Beautiful write my friend! I see you still have the talent in writing Haiku Nette! As always: awesome! I really loved reading this tremendous poem this evening! You should do very well in this contest! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 8/16/2014 9:58:00 PM
    Nette, your poem floods me with Positive Energy!!

  1. Date: 8/16/2014 9:51:00 PM
    What a cool 'KU , Nette. WEll done.

  1. Date: 8/16/2014 7:23:00 PM
    Excellent haiku. I love it. Happy writing and God bless you. Love and Prayers, Gina

  1. Date: 8/16/2014 5:56:00 PM
    :) enlightening indeed, Nette. Good one. Glad you explained CHI. :) Hugs to you.

  1. Date: 8/16/2014 5:54:00 PM
    You painted a perfect scene with thought

  1. Date: 8/16/2014 5:46:00 PM
    Oh yes! This is a really good one Nette. It should do great in the contest.

  1. Date: 8/16/2014 5:43:00 PM
    awesome, I meant...

  1. Date: 8/16/2014 5:42:00 PM
    wow, aswesome haiku, love it

  1. Date: 8/16/2014 5:41:00 PM
    How wonderful it...hugs Tim

  1. Date: 8/16/2014 5:41:00 PM
    wow, awesome, Nette - love it : )

  1. Date: 8/16/2014 5:20:00 PM
    simply stunning nette good luck in the contest - title needs a K - will remove this comment when you have done it :-) Hugs Jan xxxx