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And This Rain

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© 10/9/2011, G. Venetopoulos

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And This Rain

And This Rain

Your verse became a misty trip to distant links
maybe the reason of sun's dodging was false,
affection left behind the borderlines and brinks
reminds of your ethereal, betrothal pulse.

Our time is still, with eyes to shine, conceived,
so is your company, outside my car to stray,
a fog rescinds while slowly falls, two souls bereaved,
the arbor trees in dusky light, remote sway.

The nightly breeze becomes your touch upon my face,
conducts unknown my course to steady effuse,
our steadfast floats upon the brines that dreams encase,
a summer song of longing stills and souls' bemuse.

How many sentiments a railroad trip ascribes
beyond horizon's borderlines and faded strings,
caressing touch of fingertips by airy brides,
- your Sunday advent will become a bird that sings.

Perchance you are bending softly on my scriptures,
inside a car of an expatriating train,
while I recall on Storrow Drive, your nightly features,
- as we have missed our dreamy summer and this rain.

© 10/9/2011, G. Venetopoulos All rights reseved

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  1. Date: 4/24/2014 4:41:00 AM
    "So much love, Giorgio --- Such intense emotions for your loved one in these lines, such a deep yearning!", gautami

  1. Date: 1/5/2014 1:07:00 AM
    Very interesting and unique write, congrats on the win, Giorgio

  1. Date: 1/4/2014 12:34:00 PM
    Wonderful and splendid write,dear Friend. Congratulations on your superb win. Kudos to you..

  1. Date: 1/4/2014 3:29:00 AM
    Congrats, Giorgio on your superb win! ...soup mail in a bit...

  1. Date: 1/3/2014 11:38:00 PM
    Congrats, Giorgio. I love this!

  1. Date: 1/3/2014 8:30:00 PM
    Congratulations Giorgio, thank you for supporting me and my contest. I will miss you my friend... Always~ LINDA

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V.
    Date: 1/4/2014 3:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for honoring me! You will not go!
  1. Date: 1/3/2014 8:02:00 PM
    You make me swoon Giorgio, congratulations on your super duper win hugs xxx

  1. Date: 1/1/2014 6:47:00 PM
    Such a strong sense of longing. You are amazing with your words, Giorgio! I enjoyed this very much!

  1. Date: 12/31/2013 7:22:00 PM
    Love it. excellent wording.and lines. Well done Pete.

  1. Date: 12/27/2013 6:36:00 AM
    lovely and poignant Giorgio super pen Shadow x smile hug

  1. Date: 12/22/2013 9:37:00 AM
    Excellent and perfect in every way my dear friend Giorgio. I'm left in awe! Hand salute! Thank u so much for sharing your very precious gem. To my fave. My honor to readit tonight before heading to bed. I'll be back to read more. Advance merry merry Christmas to you and your love ones! love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 12/22/2013 7:31:00 AM
    G wonderful flow , romantic and moving work.

  1. Date: 12/22/2013 2:09:00 AM
    Oh my God you have me on the last stanza.. always and forever true, Lucinda Lu' Cayton aka Cindy :) "goodnight sweetheart well, its time to go" I sing... :) I am blessed~ as the wind blows~ how high are the stars, only heaven really knows.. You had me at your close.

  1. Date: 12/21/2013 4:52:00 PM
    You have this ability to go deep yet not contrived. I get lost among the twists and tendrils, yet survive. So once undone this gift, I save all the wrappings, the ribbons and the bows.

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V.
    Date: 1/5/2014 1:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You are attentive when you read something, sir. And sometimes you make me notice details in my poems that I missed before. Very clever of you.
  1. Date: 12/21/2013 4:36:00 PM
    A very beautiful romantic poem you have written here Giorgio, in your usual wonderful style. Enjoyed this one....peter

  1. Date: 12/20/2013 3:24:00 PM
    WONDERFULLY ROMANTIC nicely written and well done. cheri and merry christmas to you my friend yours

  1. Date: 12/20/2013 2:42:00 PM
    A good write with a nice melodic flow..Well done. ken

  1. Date: 12/20/2013 2:38:00 PM
    Written like a true poet, deep and profound, well done and I would also like to thank you for my placement in your Relate to Contest, I am very honoured.

  1. Date: 12/20/2013 2:23:00 PM
    this kind of writing style, clear and bouyant, is simply divine, G.. thanks for including me on your roster in your recent contest; much honored!.. huggs

  1. Date: 12/19/2013 11:18:00 PM
    Your images flow and link, at first disparate then secure with rhyme the obedient concatenation. I'm not exactly sure how you do it, but you do. I enjoyed reading and re-reading it.