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An Unknown Destination

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An Unknown Destination

A stone wall ahead,
A dead end,
And a heart full of broken pieces.

Each step leads to a stumble,
Each try leads to a fall,
 And each leap of faith,
Makes the heart frail.

Like in a test, a zero,
It feels like no hero,
Can come and low down,
The feeling of disappoint.

The sun looks dull,
And the night looks,
Full of light.

Too much misery,
 Like a torch always reigns,
And like an immortal army,
In your life is anarchy.



In the day making you,
Bleed from deep down,
And a hole burrowing.

Like a dark cloud cover,
Covering the light out,
And like a pest sucking,
The life out of you.

In the end making the night,
Restful, and alone lively,
Because then, no one can see you cry,
And in a glimpse, less envy in your heart.

Dry as a bone,
And quiet as a hole,
Is the long journey to an unknown destination.

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  1. Date: 1/20/2013 7:31:00 PM
    Stopping by to enjoy the deepness of your poem once more before i nod off. goodnight ~SKAT

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 5:21:00 PM
    Nice featured poem~SKAT

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 9:10:00 AM
    Good morning Dan, :-) Congratulations with your featured poem of the week. Take care and have yourself a lovely Sunday.... always & forever *LINDA

  1. Date: 1/4/2013 10:00:00 PM
    Is the destination death? Did I get the point or should I reread your poem a few times?

  1. Date: 1/4/2013 12:21:00 PM
    this is completely awesome