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An ode to the most beautiful girl on the planet

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An ode to the most beautiful girl on the planet

Who is that babe?
Who is that fox?
Who is that prettiest girl I have seen?

Truly beautiful on the inside and out.
Oops, was that too cliche?
I don't want to 
scare her away.

I draw near.
And what a surprise!
So does she.

And then I remember.
I am looking into 
the bathroom mirror.

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  1. Date: 3/22/2013 6:33:00 PM
    ELIOT , a nice warm welcome to the soup. My name is Linda, many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. I'm stopping by to invite you to one of my latest contest... called ---> "Only for the New Poets of 2013--the first poem you posted on the soup..." he he he Yes it has a long title. But, I want to give the new poets on the soup the enjoyment and challenges we offer in our contest. If you like please consider my contest. I love the enjoyment of meeting and reading the new poems from all new poets. Thank you for your time~ Always*LINDA

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 6:56:00 PM
    Eliot, very funny, a good write. Congrats. Rick

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 5:47:00 PM
    Eliot, your poem is lovely... congratulations with your winning poem~ always* PD