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Below is the poem entitled Ambiguity which was written by poet Bindu Vijayan. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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I walk over thoughts, breathing my ambiguity
I sometimes have to walk away, singled out and solo
First thing in the morning; like the gentle breeze on my skin
I walk away the edges, to soothe my hot brow

My face against the cool grass, fresh and green in dew pools
My fingers over orphan flowers - lilacs with secret rights
I succumb me, my peace in sage dawns
Beyond wisdom, that dances me into the euphoria

I am cast; the monk from layered lives
Whirling in the intoxication of a thousand dreams
I wish them alive, I give them my magic form
As every breathe vapour,  into the mystery

Some of us are Phantoms that freedom surged forth
On realities that shaped from forgotten portals
We drink from destiny that thrives on our lives
Slaking deep, from earth’s ancient lore...

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  1. Date: 2/9/2015 9:40:00 PM
    "Some of us are Phantoms that freedom surged forth" - Wow. Where do you come up with such things?

  1. Date: 2/3/2015 10:06:00 AM
    You are truly a poet, Bindu! Walking and breathing in ambiguity leaves no doubt about that! On the many dreams that intoxicate you, life is shaped! Let them free, and leave the rest to destiny. #7 // paul

  1. Date: 12/4/2014 9:51:00 PM
    I came way back here to thank you for faving gracious. I just don't know what to do to please that particular judge. I think I won with him once out of ten times!!!

  1. Date: 7/28/2014 8:29:00 PM
    you are welcome.. Linda

  1. Date: 7/27/2014 6:19:00 PM
    Bindu, This happens to be an excellent poem, to have featured on the poetry soup's home page. Congratulations, enjoy having your poem featured this week. Always ~ LINDA ~

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan
    Date: 7/28/2014 2:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Linda:)
  1. Date: 6/17/2014 6:58:00 AM
    Good Morning Bindu. I much prefer your picture to the new Avatar. You have such a pretty face and eyes that exude warmth it seems a shame not to present yourself as you are.

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan
    Date: 6/17/2014 10:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, dear Richard, what a lovely compliment!! Just felt like a change of avatar, and I don't have any new ones to upload. and, its a change to see another face, it was beginning to feel like I was staring into space for way too long, he he:)
  1. Date: 6/16/2014 10:54:00 AM
    Oh so deep so profound,,,you have a way with words, that touch the living soul, heartfelt truth that come across so sincere,,,

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan
    Date: 6/17/2014 2:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Harry:) How lovely to hear from you!
  1. Date: 5/23/2014 7:08:00 AM
    This is one of your best, you should repost it so that more people read it. You never cease to impress me Bindu.

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan
    Date: 6/17/2014 2:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, dear Richard! I have no clue how I missed this comment, sorry:( I always look forward to your encouraging comments.
  1. Date: 1/24/2014 8:43:00 PM
    always you write with such imagery. It reminds me of a few other poets here at Soup that write this way! So glad I found this one. I am having a hard time now to find ones of yours to read!!

  1. Date: 10/25/2013 4:02:00 PM
    It is wonderful to read your deep, deep words, and I certainly wish I could write these things as beautifully as you do. I guess I am stuck in my clumsy your poem Bindu...Peter

  1. Date: 9/19/2013 4:50:00 PM
    Ambiguities on the mysteries of life; Shall we ever become attuned to the frequencies? We write poetry as a balm to soothe our tethered souls curious for answers that continue to evade our consciousness. You are indeed a deep thinker and I welcome you to confused realities of existential thinking. Allan