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ALONE AT THE LAKE

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ALONE AT THE LAKE

Behind me, the beach house waves as I rock to falling stars for night now mines haloed gems but gifts sand’s grit come morning
By Cyndi MacMillan, Aug 30, 2012 For Nette Onclaud's HAMMOCK OF SKY IN TANAGA Contest

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  1. Date: 9/15/2012 11:09:00 PM
    Cyndi, a nice sweet Congratulations with your excellent win in Nette;s " HAMMOCK OF SKY IN TANAGA " beautiful contest. ~ :-) take care* PD

  1. Date: 9/15/2012 5:52:00 PM
    Congrats on your winning work..Enjoyed reading this eve...Sara

  1. Date: 9/15/2012 10:20:00 AM
    Happy to finally see this one now that I am going thru the list. Full of amazing imagery. Congrats for your win, Cyndi.

  1. Date: 9/14/2012 3:04:00 AM
    Many congrats Cyndi for this write and win.

  1. Date: 9/13/2012 12:22:00 PM
    I can visualise this Cyndi!Excellent verse.Congrats!!

  1. Date: 9/13/2012 6:06:00 AM
    A beautiful and very appealing image for me! I live the beach and have always been a night owl. It's when I feel most alert, most alive...congrats on another amazing, winning poem! Hugs, Rhonda

  1. Date: 9/13/2012 4:47:00 AM
    Wonderful imagery here Cyndi...Congratulations with your awesome win in this contest!

  1. Date: 9/12/2012 3:56:00 PM
    Oh no, I know that feeling--but well worth it. Congrats Cyndi

  1. Date: 9/12/2012 2:57:00 PM
    beautiful Cyndi, congrats

  1. Date: 9/12/2012 2:00:00 PM
    Oh don't you know that sand's itchy! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 9/12/2012 11:54:00 AM
    Cyndi, I love the contrast between night where everything is beautiful and morning's sand, lovely. Congrat's on your win!

  1. Date: 9/12/2012 9:45:00 AM
    i would take this kind of moment anytime, dear cyn..... nice shot on the emotional appeal of language and strength of concept..:) super congrats on your win in my contest!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 9/12/2012 9:07:00 AM
    Beautiful...!! The night mining haoled gems...lovely thought !! Congrats on your win !!

  1. Date: 9/12/2012 6:48:00 AM
    Another sensory delight, Cyndi...Your hammock poem makes me want to sleep in it forever! The image of the beach house waving and rocking to falling stars is like a marvelous dream..You wrote beautifully! Congrats! gwendolen

  1. Date: 9/12/2012 6:14:00 AM
    congratulations :)

  1. Date: 9/12/2012 6:04:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win Cyndi as I have just left a comment this winners list is full of my fave poets , not all I admit.. xx

  1. Date: 9/12/2012 5:27:00 AM
    Finishing up packing for my vacation and thought I would take a break and congratulate the winners of the "Hammock" contest. Congratulations Cyndi. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/12/2012 4:59:00 AM
    congrats Cyndi on a marvelous win for this incredible view of feeling the theme .. hope u r well luv ..

  1. Date: 8/31/2012 4:59:00 PM
    Beautiful Cyndi, all the best in the contest! P S Are you cross with me or something? Haven't seen you around for ages - whassup? Love,Lizzie

  1. Date: 8/31/2012 12:08:00 AM
    Another WOW, amazing as always. Hugs, Rhonda

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