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Alien Love Bite

Love  makes you stupid

when you are are enchanted  with a cupid

you  think u are in heaven 

because you are enamoured and love smitten 

truth is you are in hell when you wake up from the spell

and learned you are vampired bitten

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  1. Date: 4/10/2013 7:02:00 AM
    I doubt many people experience true love and the side effects and emotional wounds when a person leave a hole in your heart after they are gone.

  1. Date: 4/10/2013 5:57:00 AM
    Irony about love is the bipolar effect with the swing to be on cloud nine or feel like u been in combat

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 4:11:00 AM
    Aww! Come on Jennifer, there goes all my fairy tale endings. Being vampired means you were in the vampire's thrall, in other words, an illusion of love. Hence the shock when reality sets in. Very well penned albeit heartbreaking.

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    Date: 12/4/2012 8:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    There is love and requital and nature can be creul and turn on u. Truth is people u love the most will hurt u the most.
  1. Date: 11/13/2012 4:31:00 AM
    Very nice poem!Enjoyed the read.

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 4:53:00 PM
    hey, this is DANG good!!!

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 3:19:00 PM
    lol lol try not to wake up love is better in fairy tale world lol,wonderful write Jennifer

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 1:25:00 PM
    Love the ending... fun stuff! Enjoyed it, Jennifer! Love and hugs, Jack xox