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ALCHEMY OF A SPELL

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ALCHEMY OF A SPELL


Sitting alone on a chilled mound, 
I miss the tulips in all their fired hues: red,
yellow, bronze, inked blue... soon, arms 
will be wrapped in jackets of  frost inviting
the self to bite on chipped flakes,
while migrant birds and corridors 
of shivering trees melt. 

No butterflies winging or grass fleeting,
All will stand like statues cloaked in white;
I gaze through my days on flamed maps
redesigning my past summer parades;
those exotic, saucy escapades now buried
in graves of dull- powdered vapor.

So now, the blistering wind returns
as Poseidon's heir drapes the wrists
of hunched pines hiding the sun.
 How drab! But come near dusk, the sprigs
beckon a tune delicately relishing luminous
crystals humming through skyline, silver!…
a reflection of flurries pirouetting in a dance,

this, only in the alchemy of pearled winter spell !


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  1. Date: 9/21/2013 12:10:00 PM
    What a lovely scenic beauty you have created of the winter days by your pen. Beautiful write my friend and thank you for your precious comments on my Summer days Song. Hope you are keeping very fine Nette. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra

  1. Date: 9/21/2013 12:09:00 AM
    love it Nette ;}

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 10:01:00 AM
    Oh this is so lovely nette, truly poetic and so visual,,,

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 9:05:00 AM
    Shivers & goosebumps!!!! Yet, I believe, the vital line in all of this poetic splendor: "All will stand".

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 6:32:00 AM
    Ow I love the way you described the change of season with its pirhouetting raindrops in such bleak winters.An amazing imagery

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 4:39:00 AM
    beautiful poem here Nette!Love it very much!

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 2:12:00 AM
    Enchanting and full of magic,... thank you!

  1. Date: 9/19/2013 6:55:00 PM
    This is a magical write, and unlike many other poets here I look forward to the winter months and this poem rendered this possible by your exquisite writing! I really loved reading this enlightening piece here this evening! What a positively fantastic poem, awesome work! BTW I'm doing pretty well right now, everything went good with the surgery and all! I can't stay up for long periods of time as it is quite sore down there, and my wife won't let me! Thank you for your care and concern, Nette!

  1. Date: 9/19/2013 6:12:00 PM
    I can most definitely see this in the winners list!! I absolutely love this, very magical indeed! Well done, best of luck in the contest- although- you won't be needing it. ;)

  1. Date: 9/19/2013 6:07:00 PM
    this is lovely Nette...your images are so vivid it made me dread winter....good luck in the contest, this poem is sure to do well ...hugs :)

  1. Date: 9/19/2013 3:05:00 PM
    Hello sweet lady! As Eileen said, "Lovely and magical" Big hugs, Jack xoxox

  1. Date: 9/19/2013 2:12:00 PM
    I'm under the spell of your eloquent and elegant writing, Nette. Good description of the winter season, which I think we all dread. Lovely poetry, my friend. Licia :-)

  1. Date: 9/19/2013 1:27:00 PM
    Conjuring alchemy beautifully powered with sweet imagination. Lovely penned. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 9/19/2013 12:44:00 PM
    Lovely and magical...your choice of words...enchanting...wonderful, Nette

  1. Date: 9/19/2013 12:38:00 PM
    - You have magical thoughts that conjures up the most beautiful poem my friend !!! - Luck in contest !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)