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Advice of the Stars

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Advice of the Stars

This vast space we float in, we fly.  
You and I - different in appearance only, 
Our souls, our beings, deny cannot, 
Atoms of the same matter, we are, 
With gravity towards the same nucleus, 
Cells pumped by the same heart, 
Thoughts by the same mind, 
Players in the same dream.  
For survival needing the same.  
Yet trust you not when you must.  
You fight the orbit, you, escape cannot,  
That it gives you life, you do not know.  
Your blood runs in me -   
See, trust in the force and you will.  
If you leave, cease to be, you will,  
But in this faith you, free, will be.  Hmmmmm

Craig Cornish as Yoda

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  1. Date: 9/8/2013 2:46:00 PM
    nice creative piece Craig, congrats on your well deserved win :)

  1. Date: 9/7/2013 5:11:00 AM
    Craig, i love yoda speak. on your win, congratulations. Rick

  1. Date: 9/6/2013 9:26:00 AM
    HELLO CRAIG, yeah, Star Wars Rules:) I agree, I just got stuck with the Star trek contest" Sadly I'm not the oldest one, or else I'd probably would have hosted this one instead. Anyways, I had fun with the Star trek theme LOL, I kid you not. CONGRATS Love ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 11:03:00 PM
    Congrats on your win. Morgan

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 6:06:00 PM
    Hi Craig, , stopping by with smiles:-) ;-) CONGRATULATIONS :) on your STAR WARS win.. enjoy my blog "....The Death Star Blues...." when you have time. always & forever *The Lovely Poet Destroyer

  1. Date: 8/21/2013 2:31:00 PM
    Oh dear...I was wondering and then I sort of though, yes! Ok...Good one. Yoda is adorable! Lovely piece, Craig...

  1. Date: 8/21/2013 2:47:00 AM
    Hi Jedi master..Powerful and wise these words which make us human so different yet so alike.Much enjoyed this : )even if im not a star wars fan..I love it.

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 11:23:00 AM
    Yes. I often think of the same things. Nice, scientific poem. Thank you Graig G.

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 8:20:00 AM
    It is amazing that we share some of the same DNA with so many other of God's creations but each human is so unique..Enjoyed reading your creative work..Thanks for the visit to my work..Sara

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 5:11:00 AM
    Wow!!!!!!!! You destroyed this poem my friend excellent poem poet

  1. Date: 8/17/2013 7:35:00 AM
    Well done Craig. I didn't even try it. You however nailed it.

  1. Date: 8/15/2013 8:15:00 AM
    Interesting write Craig with an unexpected twist-- you have a unique way of thinking.

  1. Date: 8/15/2013 6:20:00 AM
    This is nice craig. Now I have tob read ur other poems . I liked ur style...cheers !

  1. Date: 8/14/2013 3:04:00 PM
    Hows my fairy door coming will I have to make a Xmas wreath for it LOL...Thank you for stopping by and reading my verse. Light & Love

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    Date: 8/14/2013 3:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    in good time my dear, in good time!----make it for a door that's 8" X 3"
  1. Date: 8/13/2013 3:07:00 PM
    I'm glad to see someone who knows how to be like Yoda. I did not even try this contest but I really like how you did it, Craig. Awesome Yoda portrayal!!

  1. Date: 8/13/2013 3:03:00 PM
    I like this. Very amusing I found it. :)

  1. Date: 8/13/2013 11:28:00 AM
    Star Wars Rules!