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A Wreath on the Tiles Factory

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A Wreath on the Tiles Factory

Lips of a chimney
always puff
gray smoke out.
Lorries, loaded with tiles,
always rush out.
Rupees always heap up
in a wooden drawer.
Red tiled roofs
always give them refuge.
Those ‘always’ remains
in the fossils now.

Weeds lock the compound.
Rust hugs the bolts.
Experience dies in arms.
Coolies teach their children
how to hush the hunger.
Concrete roofs
proudly put wreaths
on their predecessors.
Now  a coolie’s lips puff
curls of  worries out
before the closed gate.






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  1. Date: 1/2/2015 3:51:00 AM
    Nice one, congrats Fabiyas ...huggs

  1. Date: 1/1/2015 6:55:00 PM
    brilliantly descriptive but such a sad situation - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xxx

  1. Date: 1/1/2015 6:53:00 PM
    FAB, thank you for supporting one of the many, contest I ran last year. Dropping by to say hi in hopes you are enjoying the first day of 2015 :) :) Stop by my latest blog "You Call This Poetry" if you'd like. Enjoy the win, I sure did. Love Linda

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    Date: 1/1/2015 8:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you my friend PD for placing me among your winners. Wish you a happy new year. Regards
  1. Date: 4/10/2013 9:20:00 AM
    I am sad beyond words.

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 10:58:00 AM
    A sad write hard to picture here in the land of plenty [sigh] Glad you got the book. Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 4:43:00 AM
    Great description of an abandoned factory (?)...'rust hugs the bolts'...wow - Tim

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 8:13:00 AM
    A very beautiful verse you've penned my dear friend, Fabiyas. I enjoy reading it tonight. Thank you so much for sharing and your precious time reading and leaving a nice comment on my poem. love/hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 12/1/2012 8:46:00 AM
    Finely woven, fmv....like new silk....jimbo