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A Walk Alone

Quick as a blade lunging forward to claim a life, is this darkness falling upon me. Whispers of a sorrow, known so long ago, float in the thickness of the night. Twigs snap in the distance, I turn but my eyes fail me.. My own hand in front of my face goes unseen... then, all becomes quiet... 
   Walking along a gravel path, each step makes the pebbles unearth and dance along side me until coming to a halt.. Searching for even the slightest sign of light.. my head tilts towards the sky looking for the moon or the stars to show me what little comfort they could offer.. I am alone. Even they have abandoned me on this wicked night. Owls hooting in the midst of this forest, as if to let the rest of the forest know I am here.. and I am alone.. the wind at my back shows no mercy on my path to find light.. it taunts me, urging me to run as if it knows something I do not.. As soon as that thought was finished, a screech! 
   Snapping and cracking from branches being broken in a direct path to me. Finally I can take it no more, rendered so helpless, Frantic, I run blindly with arms reached out in front of me to take the blunt force of whatever I may run into.
suddenly, there is a loud "THUD"...
   The screeching stops, as do I.. Heart pounding intensely, it is as if it is not my heart at all, but drums being played.. Lungs threatening to collapse as my knees buckle. Tears of fear streaming down these burning cheeks..
whats that? Foot steps! I ask myself, from where? I spin, there!
   Don't scream, don't move..  Crouched down low to the ground. Eyes burning from the rush of tears, heart wrenching and twisting between my ribs.
A light! Scared, I stand.. One moment passes and the next I'm running... but why? Light is what I'm searching for! from fears and my pain... 
   This forest is a manifestation of my fears.. I must face them!
My feet come to a steady stop. Turning to face the enclosing footsteps.. My adrenalin is fading I can now feel where the broken branches had their way with the bare skin of my arms and legs. I can feel the lumps forming.

The light!
Eyes shut I cling to a nearby tree.. deep breaths in, deep breathes out.. bracing myself for what is about to come.

My eyes dart open...

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  1. Date: 11/4/2012 1:40:00 AM
    Incredible piece babe. Literally had me on the edge of my seat, then left me wanting to hear more! I'm so proud of you and your talent in writing. You continue to inspire me

  1. Date: 11/1/2012 4:39:00 PM
    An excellent piece you have shared with us Suzanne. I have enjoyed reading it this afternoon. Will be back soon to read more. Love, Carol

    hoyt Avatar suzanne hoyt
    Date: 11/1/2012 10:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I really appreciate that. Thank you for taking time to read my work and leave such nice words.
  1. Date: 11/1/2012 4:00:00 PM
    Hello Suzie, a deep poem .. well done on the imagery. Hope everything was fine once you opened your eyes......always~pd

    hoyt Avatar suzanne hoyt
    Date: 11/1/2012 10:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    That is the mystery of the poem! Maybe will be revealed in part two coming sooner than later....Thank you as well for taking time to read my work. I enjoyed your poem "Nicotine," a very poetic way to render something so dangerous!