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A summer couplet

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© G. V., 06-14-2013, All Rights Reserved
an octameter couplet (Iamb, 8 feet, 16 syllables per line)

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A summer couplet

Aberdevines disperse in woods encouraging the leaves to shine
while skies will open to reflect the nature's wisdom and design.

© G. V. 06-14-2013
(Iambic Octameter)

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  1. Date: 7/7/2013 10:57:00 AM
    Giorgio, loving your summer couplet :-) CONGRATULATIONS -in Andrea, contest!!! Take Care *xox* Linda

  1. Date: 6/30/2013 4:53:00 AM
    Giorgio, wonderful write and win. Rick

  1. Date: 6/30/2013 12:59:00 AM
    Congratulations a fine win, Giorgio!

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 5:53:00 PM
    Congratulations, friend, on a magnificent entry... well done....Jake

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 3:23:00 PM
    Giorgio, yes summer is one of the best eye openers nature has to offer. love the shining couplet. Congratulations in Andrea's steaming hot summer couplet contest... what else could we ask for -the constant reminder of the hottest season that wonders through my Texas Sky. <3<3<3 ~SKAT~"

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 1:31:00 PM
    Congrats on the win Giorgio!Lovely couplet.

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 1:28:00 PM
    Your unique style and use of vocabulary, is extraordinary and beautiful !! Should be higher on the list of winning couplets, it is beautifully written, and appreciated!

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 8:55:00 AM
    Guess what? All this time I was just guessing what aberdevines were and just now I finally looked it up and saw they were birds!!(not what I expected!) congrats for your win with this creative couplet, Giorgio.

  1. Date: 6/17/2013 2:41:00 PM
    G. V., a lovely tribute of couplets. very luscious... LINDA

  1. Date: 6/15/2013 5:38:00 AM
    'Our eyes behold from ancient times and weave her advent on fates'looms..Sooo romantic Eddie

  1. Date: 6/15/2013 2:00:00 AM
    Hi Giorgio wonderful tranquil write, good luck in the contest, all the best Poetowen

  1. Date: 6/14/2013 4:39:00 PM
    so peaceful and tranquil its a wow for me Shadow x