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A Promise Kept

I can't promise that the sun will rise, Or that I'll still be here tomorrow I can't promise who I'll be tonight Be it glee, or deepest sorrow. I can't promise that we'll never mourn, And feel pain inside our hearts I can't promise that we'll last forever But my love shall never part. I can't promise that the sun will set; That this day will die in peace, I can't promise that you'll feel for me And your love will never cease. I can't promise that the stars will shine, 'Cause they don't shine for you and me, But I promise that my words were true And my love will always be. * For my dear friend Brett *

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  1. Date: 10/30/2012 12:24:00 PM
    this has a very soothing , gentle effect, dana..i like your choice of metaphors in this as they blend so well with the theme... adorable!...thanks for my spot in your contest; so appreciated...:) huggs!

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 3:07:00 AM
    Beautifully done, really. Many congratulations on an awesome win with this wonderful poem!!

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 2:21:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in Gail Doyle's "My Endless Love" contest Dana. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 8:56:00 AM
    We never know what hand love will deal us, but like u wrote so elegantly, a promise is a promise! So excited to see u at the top of the winners' list, Dana!! You shine!! :) gwendolen

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 8:19:00 AM
    Congratulations on a terrific win Dana xx

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  1. Date: 9/30/2012 12:51:00 AM
    hearty congratulations! wonderful poem

  1. Date: 9/29/2012 11:11:00 PM
    Congrats on your win, enjoyed your poem, love debra

  1. Date: 9/29/2012 3:54:00 PM
    Love the sentiment in this poem. Congratulation on your win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 9/29/2012 2:00:00 PM
    What a stunning write! Congratulations on your win, Dana'lynn.

  1. Date: 9/24/2012 4:02:00 PM
    A delightful tender! Cynthia

  1. Date: 9/19/2012 11:18:00 PM
    Wow, the beauty of this poem is it's heartfelt honesty. Well done - JH

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  1. Date: 9/18/2012 6:29:00 PM
    This is a very special write my friend! I really enjoyed this very well crafted poem! This write inspires me to create some lovely poems of my own! Thank you for writing such an illustrious write! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 6:19:00 PM
    nicely penned...enjoyed