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A Promise dies as petals burn

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A Promise dies as petals burn

You do not love me                                                                                  
Love is more than just a word                                                                
Thorns have reached their depth

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  1. Date: 12/5/2010 7:45:00 AM
    Many a word has penetrated deeper than a thorn or indeed a knife. Deep Senyru Celene >> James :)

  1. Date: 12/2/2010 2:04:00 PM
    Here's the white rose without thorns... : ) Lovely poem, Celene. He loves you. Ruben.

  1. Date: 12/1/2010 6:56:00 AM
    special fav ..Celene ..luv..

  1. Date: 12/1/2010 5:44:00 AM
    Your point is clear, dear celene... this is going to my favorites strait without delay.

  1. Date: 11/30/2010 9:55:00 PM
    Hey, I'm with STephen. OUCH!! Some people just never get it. I hate when they use LOVE but their actons do not show it. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 11/30/2010 7:00:00 PM
    Ouch ! I knew I just had to read this one ! Great Senryu dear poet ! much love, james

  1. Date: 11/30/2010 8:56:00 AM
    this sure comes across as ouchy, Celene! but whew! sure am glad this is fiction ;) --thank you btw for the fave :) happy you liked it :) doing a bit of commenting here then off to lala land I go eep almost 1am here? enjoy your week, sweetie :)

  1. Date: 11/29/2010 7:55:00 PM
    WOW Celene.. is this final? a poem of hurt and discarded luv.. my friend.. say it is not so.. a deeply emotional poignant piece of poetry painted in tears my friend.. so lovely my friend..

  1. Date: 11/29/2010 2:27:00 PM
    Love is a noun and not a verb so it is not just a word, celene

  1. Date: 11/29/2010 2:26:00 PM
    this senryu is just fiction inspired by a sad song . .