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A Look You Haven't Seen

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A Look You Haven't Seen

I want you to look at the world, for a moment through my eyes Look at the things you neglect to see,it may take you by suprise Look at all the people on the phone,in every city and everywhere They can't live a day without them,if your one,"come on I give you a dare" Did you know you can be tracked by everyone you called and wherever you go? Most people don't even think about this and the rest don't even know How about the great microwave, that we all just seem to need? They help us to heat our food when it's our time to feed Did you know the man that created it, wouldn't even put one in his house? Because of the radiation comming out of it,was enough to kill a mouse? What about all these new wonder drugs that are supposed to help us with our health? Many were easily created with only one thing on their mind,and that is wealth Some are being perscribed by doctors with no idea what the side effects are all about Then no where to again be found,when your liver or kidneys start to go out Now you have seen the world once again, for a moment through my eyes As I ponder all the things that I see,while staring at bright blue skies
Dan Kearley: 4-26-12

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  1. Date: 6/17/2012 6:14:00 AM
    Wishing you all of God's best in all that you do! JP

  1. Date: 6/4/2012 10:26:00 AM
    Very great...Flows with an easy breaze, and also true. I'm glad I get to write poetry with a great poet like you Dan!! (:

  1. Date: 6/3/2012 9:13:00 AM
    New isn't necessarily better as we have been finding out theswe past few years. Sometimes the advance is a step backwards. You covered a lot of territory in this Dan. Soup mail.

  1. Date: 5/30/2012 5:07:00 AM's like the saying "Looking through rose coloured glasses" many people just look at the surface but don't look for what lies beneath.......very interesting poem.....Really enoyed it - Shaz x

  1. Date: 5/23/2012 8:43:00 PM
    so so TRUE!!!! keep up the great work.. your a poetry god!!

  1. Date: 5/17/2012 8:10:00 AM
    Great write! So very true. Well said.

  1. Date: 5/12/2012 9:21:00 AM
    Your profound ways, jeeze! it is of your own insight that makes you such a special guy. Love to you and yours, and the family, Cindy

  1. Date: 5/12/2012 6:05:00 AM
    Brother you and I are of the same mind. I would love to chat with you sometime. check you soup mail I am going to send you my email adress.

  1. Date: 5/4/2012 9:58:00 PM
    Very nice poem here. Thanks for stoppin by! Always, Laura

  1. Date: 5/3/2012 10:51:00 PM
    yes, there are some very scary things in the world now, Dan. And now people saying we have so much autism in the states due to vaccinations. boy where will it all end???

  1. Date: 5/1/2012 7:44:00 AM
    I liked being inside your head. i have wondered some of the same things.

  1. Date: 4/29/2012 4:52:00 PM
    Wonderful write your insight and the way your words flow.

  1. Date: 4/29/2012 8:45:00 AM
    Nice to know there's a kindred spirit out there that is aware of the stuff that gets shoved on us. Nice that we have a choice over what we do about it. Great poem Danny boy! You always give me something to chew on! :)

  1. Date: 4/28/2012 8:23:00 AM
    Really great poem, enjoyed reading it, and just loved your use of words! oxoxo Laila

  1. Date: 4/27/2012 10:22:00 PM
    I've pondered these things myself, Dan, and I think the world would have a complete nervous breakdown if we took away all their gadgets and toys...Hey, didn't know the guy who invented the microwave wouldn't have one in his own home! Gooodness gracious! Too smart for his own good! :) I like the flow and message, Dan! Gwendolen

  1. Date: 4/27/2012 8:06:00 PM
    L-O-V-E the message in this piece. Seriously? Can no one live without a cell anymore? I miss the good ol days...I often believe I was so born in the wrong times!

  1. Date: 4/27/2012 6:58:00 PM
    Insightful poetry...and yes, I too think of these things and marvel at those who do not or care not. Enjoyed this work of poetry.

  1. Date: 4/27/2012 5:57:00 PM
    good poem to read now. most people i know are stuck to their phones. they cannot just let it ring anymore.

  1. Date: 4/27/2012 2:36:00 PM
    very deep one me friend....very deep..we need pieces like this around here..great job

  1. Date: 4/27/2012 12:44:00 PM
    You thinking deep thoughts Dan. - And you`re absolutely right in what you say. - Very well written my f.e.f. oxox love Anne-Lise