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A Gnat who met a Cat

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A Gnat who met a Cat

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A gnat's now found nikko's cat  > 0.0 <
who smugly stood face beaming...
"My wrath on you, come bite me!!!"
"Eyes on focus... charge!!!"

Its daring sting pointing straight.
Was it his squeal, gave a scare?
...veered off looking for new prey,
Oh, no... James, watch out!!!



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For Linda Marie's contest " BITE ME!!!"
by gautami phookan


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  1. Date: 2/2/2014 11:37:00 AM
    I sure remember this fun write, dear gauthi! Thank your for visiting there again, yes it's so touching kasi goes there every year... It will be 10 years this year... Sighs... Hugs back to you! I hope you are well!

  1. Date: 12/14/2013 1:11:00 AM
    remembering this contest from over a year ago and wondering what happened to Linda Marie. It's a real mystery!!

  1. Date: 4/16/2012 10:30:00 PM
    Congrats on your adorable winning cat! A great response to Nikko's bite. Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 4/16/2012 11:57:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Linda-Marie's "Bite Me" contest Gautami. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/15/2012 7:06:00 AM
    ....You added Nikko's cat! : ) Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's Contest, Gautami! Ruben.

  1. Date: 4/14/2012 9:15:00 PM
    Wasn't this a fun lil contest? Excellent entry and energy portrayed by your powerful gnat. Congrats, Guati. Love, GWendolen

  1. Date: 4/14/2012 9:00:00 PM
    Can't trust these gnats. Congratulations Gautami. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 4/14/2012 8:53:00 PM
    Congrats on your win. Again, I found it very cute.

  1. Date: 4/14/2012 8:26:00 PM
    Congrats Gautami on your win!! well done...big hugs,love deb

  1. Date: 4/14/2012 7:36:00 PM
    congrats Gautami on sweet success for this super duper entry luv.. cool one..

  1. Date: 4/13/2012 5:51:00 AM
    Very cute entry, Gautami. Love your little cat picture.

  1. Date: 4/12/2012 9:17:00 PM
    lol...good one Gautami...good luck in the contest!!! lol...cats!! big huggsss,love deb :)

  1. Date: 4/12/2012 12:02:00 PM
    You got me all smiley here, gautami-- heehee that cat is proving to be a scary cat to those bugs :D-- James better watch out for that gnat :D! Very cute write, gautami :D and thanks, I think you've appeased that cat, making him have an appearance in your dodoitsu :) hugs to you (& you are not being pesky at all!) and I'll see you around, oki? I'm swamped by fleas or would that be gnats? :D

  1. Date: 4/12/2012 8:53:00 AM
    Enjoyed this funny write very much Gautami.Best wishes to you.