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A Finnish Bird

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A Finnish Bird

She eagerly meanders
Along our disgusted ways.
She’s my uncle’s guest
With me as a guide.

Evening steps to the shore -
A flock of dusty children
Chases her on the rural road,
As the crows do a lone crane,
Then I spread out my wings.

Indian English and Finnish English –
Ideas flow on,
As though through the pebbles.

Risky balancing on a coconut tree,
Which had fallen down across a pond,
Shopping before the thorny eyes,
Moments warming with the stove
Etc. – all shine again
Through the moonlight in solitude.

It was neither a love ,
Nor a friendship,
But some unshaped vibes,
Sweeter than the shaped.

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  1. Date: 9/19/2012 10:59:00 AM
    incredible, fabiyas... my emotions hang on a thread with your last stanza.. so hauntingly beautiful.. a FAV for me..:) huggs

  1. Date: 9/17/2012 9:09:00 PM
    you have soup mail

  1. Date: 9/15/2012 3:39:00 PM
    When there was a point of five on a craps table, players sometimes said "You don't have to go to Helsinki to get a Finn." Are these lyrics to a song?

  1. Date: 9/15/2012 10:43:00 AM
    This is very interesting. I am not sure sometimes if these are real birds or people described, but I enjoy the vibe of it.