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Below is the poem entitled SWIRLING WITH THE BREEZE which was written by poet nette onclaud. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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It comes around and around like a wheel that churns the moist of fragrance beneath the steam of fiery clouds... and it is so mysteriously unseen: to be swallowed by the glide of a nothern breeze which simply accepts all the glittering stones and ocean graffiti sewn on the fabric of a nightcape absolute, unabbreviated… how its mantle in turquoise props on ruffles of grace amidst a thousand fireflies; all minstrel stars collapse! The swirling roulette of gust explodes upon wayfarers laundering their breaths like gaslight of evening sensible only to the wisps of air's delicacy— the same breeze sashaying to refresh a cradled whiff unto earthly life, then to embace me with its salty fingers in the curl of darkness:an invisible slyph whistling my hidden longings in a swing of temperate rhapsody meant to return around and around,
never ever the same each time.
Breeze Contest: Poet. Undertaker by nette onclaud

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  1. Date: 1/30/2014 4:27:00 PM
    Sure reads like a winner nette fav lines [wayfarers laundering their breathe]! nette can you go vote on the verse to use for #4 please. Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/16/2014 11:27:00 PM
    Our lives are always changing, though we may not realize it. Yet, it is still beautiful to behold, even though it may be different. That is what makes life unique, and we must embrace each day that we have. The imagery in this poem is absolutely stunning, Nette! A truly amazing write!...Thank you so much for the great comments.

  1. Date: 1/16/2014 9:35:00 PM
    this one just got better and better as it went along, I just loved that second part, Nette. I guess you have a NEW contest up. I gotta check it out!!

  1. Date: 1/16/2014 1:58:00 PM
    Now to say about this poem,,It's artistic, very rich,, One can sway with the beauty of your words and how it flows..Always enjoy reading your mind blowing writes..and love you dear...

  1. Date: 1/16/2014 1:46:00 PM
    nette, I saw... you placed me first!!! Thank you so much! Writing for you after such a long time, can't tell you how wonderful I'm feeling having won! It was always such a joy writing for your contests,, Just a little while ago I was telling on the blog, how if it wasn't for your contests, I wouldn't have written in all those forms that I did, you helped us learn and try all those beautiful forms of poetry. Thank you for making me write a Rubaiyat this time!!

  1. Date: 1/16/2014 11:52:00 AM
    Very good poetic quality work..Enjoyed reading your well constructed lines..Thanks for the visit to my page..Love makes the world go round..Sara

  1. Date: 1/16/2014 8:30:00 AM
    To be engulfed by something invisible like a breath, wind or breeze is a ceremony of life's wondrous moments. Delirious spin that never comes around the same way. What you have done is really good!

  1. Date: 1/16/2014 7:38:00 AM
    - Always return around and around, with your beautiful poems Nette :) - Kiss of a beautiful life, to you my friend ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 1/15/2014 11:03:00 PM
    You have sketched a painting by your beautiful words Nette with the beauty of striking colors of Nature. Great write my friend and thank you for your kind words on my Mulberry Poem. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra K Kapoor

  1. Date: 1/15/2014 9:23:00 PM
    I can imagine the element of air stirring night with its gentle embrace. This feeling of movement is something which adds layers of warmth and sensuality for all to experience and enjoy.

  1. Date: 1/15/2014 5:00:00 PM
    This is such a unique and fabulous write my friend! I surely enjoyed reading this dynamic and lovely poem here this evening! What a terrific piece, quite a superb poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 1/15/2014 1:17:00 PM
    Hi Nette this is really well written superb, all the best Poetowen