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night touches wind, cold

     pale buds drop like tattered hems

         in slow procession,

     as gray of frothy breeze wraps...

 the desolate autumn view.

Tanka Me Fall or Winter Contest

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  1. Date: 11/9/2013 11:28:00 AM
    Reminds me the grey skylines we sometimes see in NYC. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 11/9/2013 6:45:00 AM
    Beautifully written Tanka friend Nette...take care and hoping for your safety after Haiyan hits our country. God bless

  1. Date: 11/8/2013 12:32:00 PM
    Brrrrrrr you made me feel the chill in the air.

  1. Date: 11/8/2013 8:59:00 AM
    Beautiful tanka here Nette!Love this.

  1. Date: 11/8/2013 1:10:00 AM
    I don't envy you autumn, but you've caught it's beauty nicely.

  1. Date: 11/7/2013 10:33:00 AM
    Very well written Tanka. "frothy breeze" - I smile approvingly! :) G.

  1. Date: 11/6/2013 10:37:00 PM
    This is short, but very beautiful Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla

  1. Date: 11/6/2013 9:12:00 PM
    This is a perfect entry into the Tanka Autumn/Winter contest! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this evening, such a grandiose piece my friend! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 11/6/2013 4:17:00 PM
    It gets more and more like this as winter nears. I feel like combining fall/winter for this contest. In late fall, we really can't tell when the good weather ends and the bad ends!!

  1. Date: 11/6/2013 2:56:00 PM
    I just love the feeling of this one Nettie..Excellent

  1. Date: 11/6/2013 2:12:00 PM
    Beautiful sense sounds in this creation. Excellent and exceptional poem. Nice visualization. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 11/6/2013 1:32:00 PM
    beautifully crafted piece

  1. Date: 11/6/2013 1:22:00 PM
    It soon will be that way here..Enjoyed reading your descriptive and expressive autumn work..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara

  1. Date: 11/6/2013 11:45:00 AM
    Beautiful Nette...You capture the aura of winter so well with your imagery....

  1. Date: 11/6/2013 11:44:00 AM
    .... sounds ... like home! (are you in my garden??-outside my window??) - Very nice, Nette. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/6/2013 10:46:00 AM
    Very poignant write with raw, sandscript sadness bleeding remarkably off the page. Thanks Nette for your wonderful comments and congratulations on your many new victories! I will try your contest. All the best.