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---mist hides the day

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---mist hides the day

mist hides the day
from the sleeping eye--
the alarm rings

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  1. Date: 3/19/2010 12:48:00 AM
    Nice work Debbie and thanks for your observation on my poem.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 3/18/2010 7:47:00 PM
    Is this the one you told me to check out? YOu can see I already commented. It really is lovely, but I think you did your very best (true haiku form) in the one above this one! LUv, andrea

  1. Date: 3/18/2010 5:13:00 PM
    mystical! nice! jamey

  1. Date: 3/18/2010 4:45:00 PM
    Deb, I really like this. but it's looking like free verse in guise of haiku form. Get to the visual more concrete way of the other one I just commented on. LUv ya, Andrea

  1. Date: 3/18/2010 1:16:00 PM
    Wow are we very deep with this Haiku Debbie.. excellent... a great big THANKXXX for selecting Ray and me for your 2nd place winning poem Calendar Caviar' ..this is so wonderful for us as Ray is a new poet on site.. thankxxx for your great teaching skills and challenging us to create a new piece of poetry for this contest... enjoyed.. luv.. Linda-Marie..