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Enduring Fantasy

Her words peal through my fatigued brain
They ricochet in epicycle like a torrential rain
My riddled brain cells jostle in appealing fantasy
As they transverse the trance music banging in ecstasy

Her words resonate classical moments, when,
We are in one of those escapades, as we often yen
We are in one of those romantic postures,
And I feel the prickly feeling of pleasures

Her words echo the dreamy moments, when
I feel her caressing hands on my body, then
In deep pleasure for her numerous wanks
My lower tube responds with poignant spanks

At the climax she feels the prickle pleasure
In knowing how obsessed she’s become, for sure,
That, I wield an utmost control over her
And have become her enduring catalyst as a lover.

For Black Eyed Susan contest, In a Hotel Room

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  1. Date: 2/23/2013 4:41:00 PM
    wow! excellent use of quatrain. searing hot! overdue congratulations.

  1. Date: 2/22/2013 4:40:00 PM
    Awesome and Romantic piece,Chuma...this is classic...Congrats on your superb win in this contest..Kudos to you,Brother...

  1. Date: 2/20/2013 3:52:00 AM
    poetical fantasy..........poetrical dream.............. Nice!!!!!!!!!!! So nice. Felicitations! :-)

  1. Date: 2/20/2013 2:01:00 AM
    Many Congratulations on your win Chuma, sorry i am a bit late xx

  1. Date: 2/20/2013 1:38:00 AM
    Good job! - Your hotel is 7 star! - Congratulations! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 2/19/2013 8:43:00 PM
    yes, quite a fantasy!!! Congrats on your win, chuma!

  1. Date: 2/19/2013 4:17:00 PM
    Chuma, CONGRATULATIONS :-) ~ love your awesome winning poem in Susan's contest.. take care.. PD